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  1. Posted: October 15, 2018In: Action

    A former one of the best CIA Black ops agent is forced back into action after a transport of currency is stolen by an unknown group he was requested to transport.

    t3xx3r Logliner
    Added an answer on October 16, 2018 at 7:02 am

    a retired black ops federal agent?I'd have to stop you there.? A federal agent is more synonymous with "FBI".? A black ops is either military, paramilitary, or not related to the CIA.? Usually the CIA has a more defined structure with people who are field agents.? Those are called NOCs or case officRead more

    a retired black ops federal agent?

    I’d have to stop you there.? A federal agent is more synonymous with “FBI”.? A black ops is either military, paramilitary, or not related to the CIA.? Usually the CIA has a more defined structure with people who are field agents.? Those are called NOCs or case officers (who get into the field and gather intelligence, supervise important assets who were turned, or apprentice a new case officer into becoming part of the spy game).

    Also, the CIA is chartered to help the United States government with intelligence gathering, proactive action, and usually on the darker side, assassination attempts (which banned the CIA from doing so in the 70s in their charter).? They do do seedy activities like sexual trafficking to bait more important criminals and get them captured, deposing of installed puppets for better ones, and more.

    As for stolen? currency that may be taken, the CIA doesn’t have jurisdiction to perform domestic duties like this.? They are not allowed to spy on Americans, or track people who fall into that “stolen currecy” category.? They usually are required to do foreign intelligence and somewhat counter-intelligence in some aspects.

    The stolen currency looks like it would come from the Secret Service, in which they are indeed charged with investigating counterfeits, money laundering, illegal transactions, and of course stolen currency if they’re newly minted at the U.S. Treasury.

    But these guys are right.? Why a retired dude?? What makes him so special?? What makes him a cut above the rest?? Why not pull in the new younger guys?

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  2. Posted: October 4, 2018In: Action

    Set in the near future: When his neighbourhood is raided by a violent vigilante squad, a gang-member must venture through enemy territory to get his 5 year old daughter to sanctuary before they are killed.

    Valentin Samurai
    Added an answer on October 10, 2018 at 8:17 am

    When his sanctuary compound is raided, a reformed gunslinger embarks on a journey to rescue his five years old daughter from slave merchants.

    When his sanctuary compound is raided, a reformed gunslinger embarks on a journey to rescue his five years old daughter from slave merchants.

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  3. Posted: September 19, 2018In: Action

    When an MMA fighter finds out that her estranged country singing father has witnessed a murder and was injured resulting in amnesia, she must overcome her abandonment issues and protect him from the murderer.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on September 22, 2018 at 10:37 am

    One of the fundamental problems with this concept is that the inciting incident happens to the father and not the main character. When she finds out that he witnessed a murder nothing major happens to her and it doesn't directly impact her life. Therefore, I think that her resulting action seems pooRead more

    One of the fundamental problems with this concept is that the inciting incident happens to the father and not the main character. When she finds out that he witnessed a murder nothing major happens to her and it doesn’t directly impact her life. Therefore, I think that her resulting action seems poorly motivated as it lacks a cause and effect relationship with what preceded it.

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