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To find his cancer treatment, a broke man goes after a serial killer who has a large bounty placed on his head .
That was a spelling mistake. I didn?t know how to edit an already posted log line. My bad.
That was a spelling mistake. I didn?t know how to edit an already posted log line. My bad.
See lessAfter years of isolation, an egotistic ex-cop makes his nostalgic return to re-unite with his daughter but not until he goes to war with a mob of ex-convicts.
I would slightly change Foxtrot25 longline. A misanthropic cop reunites with his estranged daughter only to find she needs his help to escape the clutches of a mob of ex-convicts.
I would slightly change Foxtrot25 longline.
A misanthropic cop reunites with his estranged daughter only to find she needs his help to escape the clutches of a mob of ex-convicts.
See lessA Brainwashed boy genius is busted out of his facility and joins the fight against the corporate system that taught him to win at all costs.
Agreed with the above. I'll add that his inciting incident is vague - it's best to describe the starting point of the story as well as the end. What specifically motivated him to take action? Was it the corporation taking him? Him being busted out? Not sure that busting him out will hold up as an inRead more
Agreed with the above. I’ll add that his inciting incident is vague – it’s best to describe the starting point of the story as well as the end.
What specifically motivated him to take action? Was it the corporation taking him? Him being busted out? Not sure that busting him out will hold up as an inciting incident, it’s a big improvement in his life not the opposite and therefore doesn’t directly need fixing. Perhaps best to specify that he gets taken by the ‘big evil’ corporation and is therefore motivated to break out and stop them from doing the same to other kids.
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