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KILLER BORN
I suggest you do what I recommended in my review of your previous loglines.
I suggest you do what I recommended in my review of your previous loglines.
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Hi songo marcel, I suggest you click on the "Formula" icon at the top of this page and study the content carefully. Using the guidelines, come up with your own version of the logline, share it with us and we help you edit and beautify it. I hope this helps Good Luck
Hi songo marcel,
I suggest you click on the “Formula” icon at the top of this page and study the content carefully. Using the guidelines, come up with your own version of the logline, share it with us and we help you edit and beautify it.
I hope this helps
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A young university student haunted by his past decides to return to his work as a hero to keep the city safe from a strange visitor from another time.
Hi Angelous vera , This is how I see it so far: A young man decides to become a superhero and keep the city safe from a malevolent time traveler. However, I think you have to clarify certain points in your logline: A young university student (what is the significance of mentioning the lead characterRead more
Hi Angelous vera ,
This is how I see it so far:
A young man decides to become a superhero and keep the city safe from a malevolent time traveler.
However, I think you have to clarify certain points in your logline:
A young university student (what is the significance of mentioning the lead character is a young university student?)
haunted by his past (What past? How did it affect the present?)
decides to return to his work (What is his work? and why “return”? Did he leave his job at some point?)
as a hero
to keep the city safe (How?)
from a strange visitor from another time who wants to do what?
I hope this helps
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