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  1. Posted: February 15, 2020In: Adventure

    To fund her tuition to become a pilot, a small-town girl joins forces with a closely guarded circle of elite air hostesses to smuggle blood diamonds from Sierra Leone, only to discover the seductive world of the criminal rich. She is forced to overcome the alluring alpha of the clique, before she becomes one of them. [Title: Diamond in the Rough]

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    Added an answer on February 16, 2020 at 1:14 am

    As Nir Shelter said.And it's not a matter that she needs to pull out "before she becomes one of them". And as soon as she starts smuggling and profiting from blood diamonds, she's is one of them. She's become corrupt, made an ethically reprehensible choice.? So it seems to me that the dramatic issueRead more

    As Nir Shelter said.

    And it’s not a matter that she needs to pull out “before she becomes one of them”. And as soon as she starts smuggling and profiting from blood diamonds, she’s is one of them. She’s become corrupt, made an ethically reprehensible choice.? So it seems to me that the dramatic issue is when/how will she come to her moral senses and clean up her act.

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  2. Posted: February 11, 2020In: Adventure

    After losing her pilot training scholarship, a dorky girl joins forces with a group of air hostesses to help them smuggle blood diamonds from Sierra Leone.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on February 12, 2020 at 11:35 am

    The story has little to do with her losing the scholarship. That could be a single line of dialogue.   To fund her tuition to become a pilot a girl teams with a group of hostesses to smuggle diamonds but .... forcing them to .....

    The story has little to do with her losing the scholarship. That could be a single line of dialogue.

     

    To fund her tuition to become a pilot a girl teams with a group of hostesses to smuggle diamonds but …. forcing them to …..

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  3. Posted: February 4, 2020In: Adventure

    Once an insecure sexy convict starts dating a professional boxer, that gives her the world and change her for the better she never expected. A childhood friend tracks her down in order to confess love for her, and she is left with a torn decision choosing between a long time friend and the man of her dreams. Les Be Honest   Don’t know if better, I’ll keep trying. However, seems a bit generic aye? not interesting enough i think.

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    Added an answer on February 7, 2020 at 12:56 pm

    Everything is generic at the heart of it. You can dump so much and start lean. I notice Her used a lot. So not 100% sure of everyone?s sexuality. Box may imply male (just a more common gender). After escaping poverty and building a life with her rich boxer boyfriend a woman is contacted by a woman fRead more

    Everything is generic at the heart of it. You can dump so much and start lean.

    I notice Her used a lot. So not 100% sure of everyone?s sexuality. Box may imply male (just a more common gender).

    After escaping poverty and building a life with her rich boxer boyfriend a woman is contacted by a woman from her past that she is still in love with.

    Everyone can tell what happens next.

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