1. Posted: March 20, 2019In:

    In Nebraska during the Dust Bowl era, a straight-laced bastard descendant of Jesse James has to travel to Devils Nest to help save the tribe of his half uncle, but shit goes south when the closing of a dam and a one-eyed Kansas City gangster threaten to sink his grandfather’s buried gold for good.

    dpg Singularity

    Agree with Richiev.? The buried gold is? the McGuffin? gimmick (per Alfred Hitchcock), but the current version buries it again. Nor is it clear what the tribe must be saved from, the drought or the dam or...?

    Agree with Richiev.? The buried gold is? the McGuffin? gimmick (per Alfred Hitchcock), but the current version buries it again.

    Nor is it clear what the tribe must be saved from, the drought or the dam or…?

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  2. Posted: March 10, 2019In:

    After her village is massacred, a woman travels to a remote temple to train so she can destroy her enemies and avenge her people.

    harry Logliner

    You?ve actually got three goals for your hero - to travel, to train, and to avenge. You can have all of those in your story but your logline needs to focus on the primary goal. And, as others have said, tell us what?s at stake if the hero fails.

    You?ve actually got three goals for your hero – to travel, to train, and to avenge. You can have all of those in your story but your logline needs to focus on the primary goal. And, as others have said, tell us what?s at stake if the hero fails.

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  3. Posted: March 2, 2019In:

    When a nine-year-old, native American boy is struck by lightning and initiated to be the next tribal shaman, he must battle his vengeful Uncle who murdered his father, and protect the world from the dark forces that seek to destroy it.

    NinaS Logliner

    I think Dkpough1 has said it all! I just wanted to say I'm intrigued by this concept and would want to watch this movie. Good luck with your project. :)

    I think Dkpough1 has said it all! I just wanted to say I’m intrigued by this concept and would want to watch this movie. Good luck with your project. 🙂

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