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A German teenager craving social acceptance unexpectedly time-travels from 1914 to 1933 and must choose: find belonging in the Hitler Youth or break his daughter out of a prison camp.
A rewritten logline and elevator pitch. I'd love your feedback - particularly on its clarity and narrative potential.
A rewritten logline and elevator pitch. I’d love your feedback – particularly on its clarity and narrative potential.
See lessUna adolescente prodigio se embarca en una aventura por los basurales de la ciudad para encontrar a su tío que ha sido secuestrado por la Mafia a cargo del manejo de los desechos.
Blame it on Google translator if I mucked this logline up ;) A teenage detective sets out to the Mafia-run garbage dumps in order to rescue her kidnapped beloved uncle. I hope this helps. Keep going!
Blame it on Google translator if I mucked this logline up 😉
A teenage detective sets out to the Mafia-run garbage dumps in order to rescue her kidnapped beloved uncle.
I hope this helps. Keep going!
See lessWhen he is denied admission to any of the college for his low grades, he gets an invitation from a mysterious college which was shut down decades ago.
Interesting setup. What’s the goal? You could start with “When an invitation arrives from a long-defunct college, a [subpar/jilted student] [adventure goal].” Make this yours. Take care.
Interesting setup. What’s the goal?
You could start with “When an invitation arrives from a long-defunct college, a [subpar/jilted student] [adventure goal].”
Make this yours. Take care.
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