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  1. Posted: December 18, 2017In: Adventure

    A young princess sheltering in a strange desert, after her father is slain and throne taken by a rival kingdom, discovers her exiled genie mother who mentors her quest to exact revenge and vanquish the usurper, dooming her as Arabia?s first maiden ruler.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on December 19, 2017 at 4:23 am

    What foxtrot25 said.? An Arabian? princess must overthrow a usurper and assert her claim as the sole and rightful heir to her father's throne.Somehow.Despite the fact that in the male-only, patriarchal milieu of Arabian politics, it's inconceivable for a women to inherit anything or rule anyone.? BuRead more

    What foxtrot25 said.? An Arabian? princess must overthrow a usurper and assert her claim as the sole and rightful heir to her father’s throne.

    Somehow.

    Despite the fact that in the male-only, patriarchal milieu of Arabian politics, it’s inconceivable for a women to inherit anything or rule anyone.? But if you’ve got it figured out how the guys would accept a female ruler, more power to you.

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  2. Posted: December 7, 2017In: Adventure

    A 50’s filmmaker, obsessed with his craft, wants make a dramatic retelling about the men who first climbed the notorious K2, and shoot it all on location. He brings actors and a crew with him but can they survive the unforgiving mountain?

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on December 9, 2017 at 5:32 am

    First of all, loglines make statements.? They don't explicitly raise questions. So a logline should never end in a question mark. Even more relevant than the movie Fitzcarraldo, was the real life struggle of the director Werner Herzog to make the movie in the jungle of Brazil, as documented in "TheRead more

    First of all, loglines make statements.? They don’t explicitly raise questions. So a logline should never end in a question mark.

    Even more relevant than the movie Fitzcarraldo, was the real life struggle of the director Werner Herzog to make the movie in the jungle of Brazil, as documented in “The Burden of Dreams”.

    If this story idea is based on the real life struggle of a real life filmmaker to ascend K2 in the 1950’s to finish a film, then it would make for a credible and compelling story.? Otherwise, imho, not so much.

    fwiw

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  3. Posted: October 24, 2017In: Adventure

    Novel: A french teenager runs away to fulfill his dream of becoming an actor in L.A.

    pedrots Penpusher
    Added an answer on October 31, 2017 at 11:47 pm

    That's the premise, not the logline. Logline needs to identify conflict. Where does conflict arise from? Act I to Act II?

    That’s the premise, not the logline.

    Logline needs to identify conflict. Where does conflict arise from? Act I to Act II?

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