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A young African boy who suffered all his life from hunger and destruction caused by the European colonization , sets himself in a journey and adventure to gather all food possible and prepare a feast and great meal for his tribe. However he will face many obstacles and meet allies in his journey.
My only point other than Nir's is a pet peeve of mine. Loglines need to flow and always should be only one sentence, two at max! You've got a lot in here and could be easily condensed to just one, focus on your core story and protagonist and it will be easy enough.
My only point other than Nir’s is a pet peeve of mine. Loglines need to flow and always should be only one sentence, two at max! You’ve got a lot in here and could be easily condensed to just one, focus on your core story and protagonist and it will be easy enough.
See lessIn an American West ruled by dinosaurs, a young Teddy Roosevelt goes on an expedition into the Yellowstone to hunt one of the last of the great predators, confronting his and his nation’s destiny.
I think it is a fun idea to take dinosaurs out of their traditional setting and mix it up with historical fiction. ?If the story is good, I might ignore the scientific flaws about oxygen ect?mentioned in other reviews. With that said, I don't see the conflict. It's just Teddy Roosevelt going huntingRead more
I think it is a fun idea to take dinosaurs out of their traditional setting and mix it up with historical fiction. ?If the story is good, I might ignore the scientific flaws about oxygen ect?mentioned in other reviews.
With that said, I don’t see the conflict. It’s just Teddy Roosevelt going hunting. ?I guess, my advice would be to shorten and add conflict and drama.
Good Luck!
See lessThe webseries follows grief-stricken Jason Moore, a teenager whose parents have been killed as a result of a deadly disease spreading like wildfire, caused by a cosmic entity known as the Plague Doctor. Now, he plans to survive in a world where fifteen sixteenths of the population have passed on, and by the end, plans to kill the Plague Doctor, thus ending the Modern Plague once and for all.
A great rewrite by dpg, a logline's purpose is to tell your story in as clear and concise a way as possible. Hope this helps.
A great rewrite by dpg, a logline’s purpose is to tell your story in as clear and concise a way as possible. Hope this helps.
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