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When spirits attack her town, a young girl must pair up with a faceless spirit that will help her settle a dept between the spirit world and the humans in order to save her kingdom.
I love the concept and would read a story about that. I also agree with the comment about refining your logline to avoid using the word 'spirit' three times :)
I love the concept and would read a story about that. I also agree with the comment about refining your logline to avoid using the word ‘spirit’ three times 🙂
See lessThe most legendary and recognizable singing slave in al-Andalus hires an adventuring Norman to steal the Caliph’s prize possession, herself.
I am left wondering 'Why'. ?What is the slave wanting to achieve? Sounds like an interesting start, but I am unsure of what the story is.
I am left wondering ‘Why’. ?What is the slave wanting to achieve?
Sounds like an interesting start, but I am unsure of what the story is.
See lessA group of explorers discover a previously uncharted island, only to discover the terrifying reason why it wasn’t discovered earlier. Now, trapped, they must find a way to escape the island’s horrors.
Hello, the last rewrite is much better, still it seems to me that it's too vague to create interest in the reader. I personally don't like expressions like "change himself in the process" because it's more a promise of what you want to do than a proof that you master your story. All movies show someRead more
Hello, the last rewrite is much better, still it seems to me that it’s too vague to create interest in the reader.
See lessI personally don’t like expressions like “change himself in the process” because it’s more a promise of what you want to do than a proof that you master your story. All movies show some kind of “change” so it’s useless to talk about it in this vague form.