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A whimsical young woman phases into a fire realm being purged of magic and struggles balancing her world and saving the world of her dreams.
I agree with dpg be more specific in your descriptions. Plus give us some goals. ?Tells us the story. What is purging, who is doing it what must she do to save it. ?Or what is her eventual goal that will save it. A whimsical young woman must capture the xxx to defeat the xxx to save a world exists oRead more
I agree with dpg be more specific in your descriptions. Plus give us some goals. ?Tells us the story.
What is purging, who is doing it what must she do to save it. ?Or what is her eventual goal that will save it.
A whimsical young woman must capture the xxx to defeat the xxx to save a world exists only in her dreams.
Okay not your story, but you can see how it sets out the beats of the story.
See lessWhen spirits attack her town, a young girl must pair up with a faceless spirit that will help her settle a dept between the spirit world and the humans in order to save her kingdom.
I love the concept and would read a story about that. I also agree with the comment about refining your logline to avoid using the word 'spirit' three times :)
I love the concept and would read a story about that. I also agree with the comment about refining your logline to avoid using the word ‘spirit’ three times 🙂
See lessThe most legendary and recognizable singing slave in al-Andalus hires an adventuring Norman to steal the Caliph’s prize possession, herself.
I am left wondering 'Why'. ?What is the slave wanting to achieve? Sounds like an interesting start, but I am unsure of what the story is.
I am left wondering ‘Why’. ?What is the slave wanting to achieve?
Sounds like an interesting start, but I am unsure of what the story is.
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