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A group of explorers discover a previously uncharted island, only to discover the terrifying reason why it wasn’t discovered earlier. Now, trapped, they must find a way to escape the island’s horrors.
Hello, the last rewrite is much better, still it seems to me that it's too vague to create interest in the reader. I personally don't like expressions like "change himself in the process" because it's more a promise of what you want to do than a proof that you master your story. All movies show someRead more
Hello, the last rewrite is much better, still it seems to me that it’s too vague to create interest in the reader.
See lessI personally don’t like expressions like “change himself in the process” because it’s more a promise of what you want to do than a proof that you master your story. All movies show some kind of “change” so it’s useless to talk about it in this vague form.
The gods an Irish programmer?s been praying to are real, and they have a task – find weapons from ancient Celtic myth or watch the human race be eradicated by a legion of dead tyrants.
Hello, why a programmer??I suggest to make clear why a programmer would be the most interesting character for this movie, or to ask yourself who would be the most interesting character for THIS?movie.
Hello,
See lesswhy a programmer??I suggest to make clear why a programmer would be the most interesting character for this movie, or to ask yourself who would be the most interesting character for THIS?movie.
When her adventurous wheelchair-bound cousin embarks on an outback adventure, a fearful photographer must tag along to protect her, but they encounter killer kangaroos with a taste for human flesh.
The logline mentions two protagonists yet describes the photographer as the main character, which creates a bit of confusion. I think best to specify one main character in the logline, to that matter the one character that will face the greatest feat. In this case it sounds like the wheel chair bounRead more
The logline mentions two protagonists yet describes the photographer as the main character, which creates a bit of confusion. I think best to specify one main character in the logline, to that matter the one character that will face the greatest feat. In this case it sounds like the wheel chair bound adventure seeker should be the MC, that’s why I like DPG’s re write, though I disagree with the structure.
My try:
See lessAfter a wheel-chair bound adventure seeker and her family encounter a mob of man eating Kangaroos, she must lead them all in a fight to kill the Alpha male if they are to survive.