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  1. Posted: November 12, 2015In: Adventure

    The gods an Irish programmer?s been praying to are real, and they have a task – find weapons from ancient Celtic myth or watch the human race be eradicated by a legion of dead tyrants.

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    Added an answer on November 12, 2015 at 7:42 pm

    Hello, why a programmer??I suggest to make clear why a programmer would be the most interesting character for this movie, or to ask yourself who would be the most interesting character for THIS?movie.

    Hello,
    why a programmer??I suggest to make clear why a programmer would be the most interesting character for this movie, or to ask yourself who would be the most interesting character for THIS?movie.

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  2. Posted: November 6, 2015In: Adventure

    When her adventurous wheelchair-bound cousin embarks on an outback adventure, a fearful photographer must tag along to protect her, but they encounter killer kangaroos with a taste for human flesh.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on November 11, 2015 at 12:15 pm

    The logline mentions two protagonists yet describes the photographer as the main character, which creates a bit of confusion. I think best to specify one main character in the logline, to that matter the one character that will face the greatest feat. In this case it sounds like the wheel chair bounRead more

    The logline mentions two protagonists yet describes the photographer as the main character, which creates a bit of confusion. I think best to specify one main character in the logline, to that matter the one character that will face the greatest feat. In this case it sounds like the wheel chair bound adventure seeker should be the MC, that’s why I like DPG’s re write, though I disagree with the structure.

    My try:
    After a wheel-chair bound adventure seeker and her family encounter a mob of man eating Kangaroos, she must lead them all in a fight to kill the Alpha male if they are to survive.

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  3. Posted: October 17, 2015In: Adventure

    When two personalities, one a meek family man the other a covert assassin, discover they share the same mind and body, they must find the organisation that merged them together to reverse the process before the increased brain activity overloads their mind.

    sloanpeterson Logliner
    Added an answer on October 24, 2015 at 9:16 am

    Very interesting. ?Makes me want to know more and how you may have pulled this concept off. ?It's a little wordy though. ?I will attempt to shorten it: When a meek family man and a covert assassin discover they share the same body, they must force a mysterious organization to reverse it before the iRead more

    Very interesting. ?Makes me want to know more and how you may have pulled this concept off. ?It’s a little wordy though. ?I will attempt to shorten it: When a meek family man and a covert assassin discover they share the same body, they must force a mysterious organization to reverse it before the increased brain activity overloads their mind.
    I also wonder what this mind overload would mean. ?Would it kill him? ?Or make him insane? ?It might be worth noting the stakes.

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