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Mentor · 8,245 points

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19 loglines
538 reviews

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Noise Control Beta – In a world where to perceive a forbidden noise is the highest crime, a cop whose wife starts hearing it must find its origin in the desperate attempt to save her.

May 15, 2017
When a man is cut into two symmetrical halves completed with mechanical prosthesis, the two sides fight each other to become a full person again.

October 15, 2015
When a homeless amputee who lost the right side of his head and body is chased by a crippled criminal who appears to be his missing half, he must overwhelm him to discover the origin of their condition and become a full man.

October 15, 2015
After Lazarus’ resurrection, a Roman centurion must rule the Jewish and a new-born rebel sect to contain the spread of the living-deads.

October 14, 2015
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When the hipster invasion drain the neighborhood of low-incomers, a wrecked ex-butcher rallies the rejects to hit back, only to find the hipsters drain people of blood too — HIPSTER VAMPIRES

October 7, 2015
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DIRTY LAUNDRY: Under the influence of her new washing machine, a shy single woman seeks pleasure in her dirtiest fantasies while dreaming of having a family.

October 6, 2015
While trying to fix a noisy microwave, an appliance repair old man tells to his apprentice the strangest stories he witnessed in his job: a single mother hypnotized by her washing machine, an electronics hobbyist tuning a ultrablack screen TV set, a neglected housewife in love with her refrigerator.

August 6, 2015
When her agent drops her, a shy “love story” author attends a horror movie workshop where screenwriters are kept prisoner by a perverse guru who makes them die like their characters, so that only the best writer will survive.

July 27, 2015
When a group of aspiring screenwriters join a workshop held in an isolated country house, they find themselves prisoners of a perverse guru and they must write a perfect script or face torture and death.

July 24, 2015
When his research lab risks beign shut down, a passionate scientist and his nerdy intern build a believable fake AI, but they need to pass a series of tests to be taken seriously while unscrupulous corporations want to take possession of the invention.

July 7, 2015

on Noise Control Beta – In a world where to perceive a forbidden noise is the highest crime, a cop whose wife starts hearing it must find its origin in the desperate attempt to save her.

Thanks everyone, the problem is that the gouvernement says the noise doesn't even exist - that people who 'hears it' are sick and will become dangerous. That's why I'm not 100% ?convinced "with the rare ability to hear".
on An unemployed dropout fakes the paperwork to become a family physician. When her patients start to see through the lie, she decides to use surgery to silence them.

I have no problem with a villain as protagonist. Besides, the problem is that he has no serious?obstacles, only 'solutions'. problem: unemployed/solution: fake papers; problem:patients upset/solution: killing them. This movie is a win win win... logline should focus on a…
on Born in the 70’s to a young and offbeat anti-war activist, a roubled woman recounts her spiraling descent into adulthood while baking an apple pie.

"her spiraling descent into adulthood": in my opinion the movie is hidden in this un-undertandable words. What happens in the movie? I like the idea that everything is a flashback while the main character is?baking an apple pie but this…
on PALEO When her boss at a wild game restaurant turns into a Neanderthal, a vegetarian waitress must solve the puzzle of evolution to escape with her life.

This is a good concept in my opinion. It's not clear why the waitress should help his boss (can't she just run away?) - anyway I think there are many ways to upgrade this logline, it just needs some work.…
on When the public ignores evidence of violent rape by a demagogic president, a reporter convinces MIT nanobot engineers to help her surveil him, certain that airing his private moments will destroy him, but also naive to the many dangers of the plan.

The idea is interesting but I think the movie is 'outside' the logline. I mean, the real movie is about what happens after the reporter starts the?surveillance and the logline should capture that rahter than 'convincing the mit scientists of…
on When an Iraq War vet loses both his house and wife, he resolves to use his training to take out the CEO of a major NYC investment bank whom he blames for his losses and whose security detail is mostly composed of other vets.

Hello, I keep an eye on this website and so I read many many loglines. I must say this one is faaaaaar better than the average! I think it could be improuved on the level of the words (too many…
on An esoteric detective is recruited to find a pregnant woman’s killer, and a struggling rock and roll band holds the key to the mystery.

I personally have the feeling of a random sequence of unconnected elements... an esoteric detective, a murdered pregnant woman, a rnr band... This could be a?masterpiece (it makes me think about the novel Inherent Vice - I haven't seen the…
on In tradition of the French new wave films of the 60s, a young tap-gamer struggles with success and relationship strain after a conglomerate buys his game, while the conglomerate chairman frames an African American trash-man for his recent statuiatory rape lawsuit.

I can't see how the differents parts create a whole... a game, a rape, an african american trash man, french new wave, conglomeration... this could be genius but as a logline I don't understand anything at all sorry.
on Geeart1

Hello, I personally like when a logline can describe the basic plot of the movie in terms of main character's goal/obstacles. "the world's most distructive problems in his mind": first, I'd like to know what specific problem or I don't…
on When an mysterious artifact appears on the black market, a pair of dealers must outsmart the criminals of the city’s underworld in order to attain it.

Anytime I see the word "mysterious" in a logline, I see a problem.

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