PALEO When her boss at a wild game restaurant turns into a Neanderthal, a vegetarian waitress must solve the puzzle of evolution to escape with her life.

This is a good concept in my opinion. It's not clear why the waitress should help his boss (can't she just run away?) - anyway I think there are many ways to upgrade this logline, it just needs some work. Good job! And good luck!

It's a comedy. ?In that genre, the rules for the use of magic are looser.

For me, the big question to answer is not HOW the magic can happen but WHY? ? What has either the girl or the guy or both done wrong -- character flaw -- that has caused this "punishment" to be inflicted on their relationship?

It's a comedy. ?In that genre, the rules for the use of magic are looser.

For me, the big question to answer is not HOW the magic can happen but WHY? ? What has either the girl or the guy or both done wrong -- character flaw -- that has caused this "punishment" to be inflicted on their relationship?