When an Iraq War vet loses both his house and wife, he resolves to use his training to take out the CEO of a major NYC investment bank whom he blames for his losses and whose security detail is mostly composed of other vets.

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FFF · Mentor · 8,245 pts

Hello,
I keep an eye on this website and so I read many many loglines. I must say this one is faaaaaar better than the average! I think it could be improuved on the level of the words (too many words, not very elegant in style). Anyway, I can see a movie here!

Neer Shelter · Singularity · 39,985 pts

Is this the plot of The Big Short? I don't know... that was more about the Doctor turned stock broker not an Iraq War vet.

The inciting incident needs to be described as a motivating event i.e: After his bank manager forecloses on his house an Iraq war vet loses his wife, he then seeks revenge by...

CraigDGriffiths · Overlord · 12,600 pts

An Iraq War vet plans to kill the CEO of the bank he blames for his financial problems, but the CEO's security are all ex-vets as well.

Is there a hero? Can you supply why we would be backing the murderer. How and why do we sympathise with him?