When an mysterious artifact appears on the black market, a pair of dealers must outsmart the criminals of the city’s underworld in order to attain it.

Categories:

7 reviews

wholeintheskies · Penpusher · 75 pts

I can see what will happen in the film, but I'm left wondering if the protagonist "dealers" are part of the underworld or are they bona-fide vendors who are now going to find themselves in waters too deep for their liking.

FFF · Mentor · 8,245 pts

Anytime I see the word "mysterious" in a logline, I see a problem.

Neer Shelter · Singularity · 39,985 pts

How does the artefact impact the main characters? Is it purley a financial interest or is there more? The artefact appearing doesn't make for a very good inciting incident, is there something else that happens that motivates the main characters to have to take action?

Lastly, why two MCs would the story not work just as well with one? If so best to re work it to be about one character.