When an exhausted Driver contemplating a life change, receives an ultimatum to go into work on his day off. He must deal with an assorted bunch of characters, who will shape what direction he will take his life.

What the others wrote.

I'll add that the logline needs to describe a starting and ending point, in other words inciting incident and goal.

As Richiev wrote, describe his goal in detail. However, also describe? what motivated him to achieve this goal. In this case what specific event motivated him to HAVE to change his life?

As the others have said. ?The story seems to be driving the Driver rather than the Driver driving the story.

As the others have said. ?The story seems to be driving the Driver rather than the Driver driving the story.