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A well-to-do Chef at the peak of his career runs out of inspiration and passion for his food. He goes roadtripping towards his home town hoping to find his muse again but on his way, he can’t help but visit unique and sometimes deadly cafes, restaurants and food stalls he comes upon.
1: A little long 2: You don't have to tell us he is heading for home, just that he's taken to the road. 3: The inciting incident isn't compelling (But it is understandable) 4: The good part, this is the kind of story I would enjoy watching. ----- When he loses his passion for cooking, an overbearingRead more
1: A little long
2: You don’t have to tell us he is heading for home, just that he’s taken to the road.
3: The inciting incident isn’t compelling (But it is understandable)
4: The good part, this is the kind of story I would enjoy watching.
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When he loses his passion for cooking, an overbearing chef hits the road taking jobs in roadside diners and small town restaurants determined to re-discover his muse.
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Hope that helped, good luck with this!
See lessThe ruler of militant state decides to make war against the peaceful Flavestina and conquer it. Relying on his army, he doesn’t at once accept his Astrologer’s advice: to use magic for sure victory. The magic ritual, however, will require stealing the Golden Cup from the altar of the Temple of the Sun in Flavestina. Army and magic against love and courage: who will win?
What kind of ruler is he? Inexperienced, young, headstrong, etc... What does he actually do in the story? Your first 3 sentences describe the setup of the movie (2 sentences too long), and you never actually describe what happens, what the ruler's main 'quest' is. Where does "love" enter the pictureRead more
What kind of ruler is he? Inexperienced, young, headstrong, etc…
What does he actually do in the story? Your first 3 sentences describe the setup of the movie (2 sentences too long), and you never actually describe what happens, what the ruler’s main ‘quest’ is. Where does “love” enter the picture?
You could narrow that setup down to half a sentence- “Convinced by his top advisors to invade a neighboring peaceful country, an inexperienced ruler…[WHAT HE DOES].” Something like that-
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