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  1. Posted: March 21, 2018In: Comedy

    Revision: Trapped into a lease with his ex-wife, a depressed writer must navigate the intricacies of single life, but when he falls for his married boss, life gets so much more complicated.

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    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on March 22, 2018 at 4:37 am

    The logline gives the protagonist a problem and a major complication but it fails to give him a dramatic objective goal. Given the problem, given the complication what must he do?? What becomes his objective goal?

    The logline gives the protagonist a problem and a major complication but it fails to give him a dramatic objective goal.

    Given the problem, given the complication what must he do?? What becomes his objective goal?

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  2. Posted: March 14, 2018In: Comedy

    Judgement Day

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on March 15, 2018 at 1:37 am

    As the others have said.And >>> to stop an apocalyptic showdown between his Antichrist son and Jesus.Obviously they have to fail.? Because the showdown is the one scene the audience would really want to see.? It's the Obligatory Scene and to not deliver it would be anti-climactic, a real buRead more

    As the others have said.

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    >>> to stop an apocalyptic showdown between his Antichrist son and Jesus.

    Obviously they have to fail.? Because the showdown is the one scene the audience would really want to see.? It’s the Obligatory Scene and to not deliver it would be anti-climactic, a real bummer.

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  3. Posted: March 3, 2018In: Comedy

    Trapped into a lease with his ex-wife, a young writer must come to terms with single life, all whilst making plans for his future.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on March 4, 2018 at 5:14 pm

    This feels like acTV series not a movie. A movie can be done once, a TV show is s universe. His struggle to come to grips with single life isn?t a single goal.

    This feels like acTV series not a movie. A movie can be done once, a TV show is s universe. His struggle to come to grips with single life isn?t a single goal.

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