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  1. Posted: February 28, 2018In: Comedy

    When a team of employees learns that a once in a lifetime redundancy is being offered to one of them, a lone employee encourages the others to demonstrate their willingness to be the one retrenched. In the process, the team learns more about who their colleagues really are for them

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on March 3, 2018 at 9:23 am

    Possible title: The Upside of Downsizing

    Possible title: The Upside of Downsizing

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  2. Posted: February 27, 2018In: Comedy

    In order to open a fingerprint secure safe and steal money for his chemotherapy, a shy delivery boy who can not see a blood has to cut and steal five thumbs from five different mafia bosses in one night.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on February 27, 2018 at 9:14 am

    Chump ChangeIn the course of his deliveries, the lead character discovers two big pharma execs have just petitioned Congress to get exclusive rights to the medicine his daughter needs to stay alive, They are are bragging how much money the company will make when they raise the prices.This is also whRead more

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    In the course of his deliveries, the lead character discovers two big pharma execs have just petitioned Congress to get exclusive rights to the medicine his daughter needs to stay alive, They are are bragging how much money the company will make when they raise the prices.

    This is also when the lead discovers the safe that has the money he desperately needs; but to the execs, it is just for everyday expenses… Chump Change.

    1: This way the ‘bad guys’ who the lead?is stealing from will be directly related to the problem: The high price of the medicine. It is poetic?justice

    2: Also, if it is his daughter and not him who needs the medicine?your lead character will be more sympathetic to the audience.

    3: The Irony is, to the lead character the money in the safe means the entire world… to the Pharma exects it means less than nothing, just some cash they use when they don’t want what they’re doing on the books,

    Your lead character is breaking the law, but everyone can relate to a father who, after exhausting?every legal measure, will do anything for the life of his little girl.

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  3. Posted: February 25, 2018In: Comedy

    On the night of his big break, an up-and-coming comedian interrupts a pharmacy robbery, triggering a madcap chain of events as he races against the gang and the clock to get back to the theatre.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on February 25, 2018 at 2:20 pm

    Nice premise, I would change it so the MC is the only witness to the crime and as such, they want to kill him. He must now dodge their bullets, lose them in the streets of LA and make it to the theater on time. I would even take it one step further and describe the nature of his big break to increasRead more

    Nice premise, I would change it so the MC is the only witness to the crime and as such, they want to kill him. He must now dodge their bullets, lose them in the streets of LA and make it to the theater on time. I would even take it one step further and describe the nature of his big break to increase the stakes. What if he was invited on to the Late Show for his career making appearance? For most comedians that’s a do or die, only for him it applies literally as well.

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