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Spike a shy, autistic football genius finds a teams playbook, easily memorizes it, then morphs into a gregarious man about town while helping the head coach win the big game
As stated by previous reviewers, this Logline is a mess. Moreover I don't think that as describe the motivation to hire your autistic character makes sense. To me it would make more sense if the playbook is lost or destroyed during the head coach accident. When the substitute coach realises that theRead more
As stated by previous reviewers, this Logline is a mess. Moreover I don’t think that as describe the motivation to hire your autistic character makes sense. To me it would make more sense if the playbook is lost or destroyed during the head coach accident. When the substitute coach realises that the autistic character has memorised the entire playbook, then it makes sense to hire him and try to integrate him into the coaching staff.
When an autistic football savant is hired to help a newly appointed football head coach, he must convince both his family, doctors and sceptic players of his ability to avoid being permanently committed.
See lessA small town reporter tells a little white-lie to boost his ego and it snowballs out of controll. He must now make that lie a reality or be shamed out of town.
Agree with the other reviews. The first thing that caught my eye was little white lie.? If it were in quotation marks, it might give? it a larger significance, ?meaning it might actually be a larger lie and the?reader will wonder what it really is.?I like the concept and can immediately relate to thRead more
Agree with the other reviews. The first thing that caught my eye was little white lie.? If it were in quotation marks, it might give? it a larger significance, ?meaning it might actually be a larger lie and the?reader will wonder what it really is.?I like the concept and can immediately relate to the story. What if he told the lie to a specific person he thought he could trust and they can’t hold a secret?? As word gets out about the big lie than the challenge becomes even greater and maybe even more fun.
See lessLogline: Spike an affable, autistic football genius helps a team win its first super Bowl. Concept: Spike and his older brother Bradley traverse through the city causing an uproar all while Spike is preparing the head coach to win the Super Bowl.
There is a story in there somewhere. Look at the want and needs of the people involved. How does he get to the coach? Why and how are they causing havoc? Why are these related?
There is a story in there somewhere. Look at the want and needs of the people involved.
How does he get to the coach?
See lessWhy and how are they causing havoc?
Why are these related?