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A man wants to date a woman. However, a bad couple takes away their paintings of Santa Claus displayed in a park, causing conflict and misunderstanding between the man and the woman.
I am not sure who the two who like each other is, is it the couple whose painting is stolen, or are one of the characters from the original couple and one of the characters from the 'bad couple' friends and this incident causes trouble between them? The wording is just a little unclear but the overaRead more
I am not sure who the two who like each other is, is it the couple whose painting is stolen, or are one of the characters from the original couple and one of the characters from the ‘bad couple’ friends and this incident causes trouble between them?
The wording is just a little unclear but the overall idea does get through.
See lessSo more along the lines of a minor tweak to the logline, not a major overhaul.
A real estate agent trying to reconnect with his estranged sister, learns that she is the leader of an underground society of clowns caught in a civil war of ideals. Now he must choose whether to get her out of the life, or suit up in pancake makeup of his own.
This could be intriguing. But before I would review the logline or offer suggestions, I have one question: Why is he a real estate agent? How will that add to his story?
This could be intriguing. But before I would review the logline or offer suggestions, I have one question: Why is he a real estate agent? How will that add to his story?
See lessSeven former college students reunite to finish a film they began twenty-five years before.
What is the conflict and stakes?
What is the conflict and stakes?
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