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An anomaly opens a portal which brings three people from different time periods under one roof to deal with the alien race that monitors the universe for inferior race development.
Three strangers brought together from different time period ?have 24 hours to convince an alien race that humanity is worthy of being saved.
Three strangers brought together from different time period ?have 24 hours to convince an alien race that humanity is worthy of being saved.
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A rejected astronaut gets a second chance when he is chosen to pilot a private mission to salvage a huge bounty orbiting Mars, but success means getting there first.
A rejected astronaut gets a second chance when he is chosen to pilot a private mission to salvage a huge bounty orbiting Mars, but success means getting there first.
See lessafter a bizarre experience in his lawn, a know-it-all businessman seeks out the-indian-guru-next-door to-instead-find himself in the drug business with a hippie
The concept is confusing. A few questions that come to mind are: Mid-life crisis or not, why would a "...top gun..." business man change his business if he is already successful? I assume "...top gun..." means very good, perhaps best to change the description to something more relevant like 'a sharkRead more
The concept is confusing.
A few questions that come to mind are:
Mid-life crisis or not, why would a “…top gun…” business man change his business if he is already successful?
I assume “…top gun…” means very good, perhaps best to change the description to something more relevant like ‘a shark’.
Since it’s set in the US, a marijuana business would be legal in most states – why would the DEA take issue with him?
What does a media firm have to do with drug enforcement?
Other than the logic flaws, what is his major problem? Is it the DEA? The media firm? A decline in business? What is his goal?
As a logline’s primary function is to describe a plot, it needs a main character, an inciting incident and a goal – something you can’t have a strong plot without. It seems as though most of your concepts suffer from similar issues, I strongly suggest you read through other posts or the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar for a more detailed explanation.
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