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a broke man falls back to his “college dream band” only to realize his record producer is the mafia he is running from
This logline really only sets up the Inciting Incident. So rather than promising a 100 minute movie, it gives us the first 15 minutes. A logline needs to hold the promise of a full-length film. To fix this, you need to answer the question DPG asks above: "What MUST he do".
This logline really only sets up the Inciting Incident.
So rather than promising a 100 minute movie, it gives us the first 15 minutes.
A logline needs to hold the promise of a full-length film.
To fix this, you need to answer the question DPG asks above: “What MUST he do”.
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Possible title: "Can't Win for Losing"
Possible title: “Can’t Win for Losing”
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Richiev's version works well - I can see a plot from reading it as there will likely be multiple obstacles on his way to father approval each with its own unique culture clash and dramatic stake. That said if you had one big thing he had to do to get dear old dad's approval it would help focus the pRead more
Richiev’s version works well – I can see a plot from reading it as there will likely be multiple obstacles on his way to father approval each with its own unique culture clash and dramatic stake. That said if you had one big thing he had to do to get dear old dad’s approval it would help focus the plot. What if he had to master Chines opera or Kung Fu or traditional Chinese painting?
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