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  1. Posted: January 24, 2017In: Comedy

    Commander in Tweet: When a Muslim high school hacker successfully trolls a social media obsessed president a real terrorist group forces him to impersonate the leader of an Islamic state and launch a fake attack on the US to provoke a nuclear response and start WWIII. (43 words)

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on December 31, 2017 at 8:08 am

    where's the good guy I am supposed to be rooting for?

    where’s the good guy I am supposed to be rooting for?

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  2. Posted: December 27, 2017In: Comedy

    to live a little longer

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    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on December 27, 2017 at 1:55 pm

    When he is captured by cannibals, a lost food critic has one month to teach the tribe the joy's of vegetarianism, or be the main course at the summer solstice.

    When he is captured by cannibals, a lost food critic has one month to teach the tribe the joy’s of vegetarianism, or be the main course at the summer solstice.

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  3. Posted: December 11, 2017In: Comedy

    Whistler Private Investigator/food writer lives in an illegal RV solves crimes while preoccupied with getting stoned and playing music by interpreting clues provided to him by friends he meets who are constantly on their cell phones.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on December 12, 2017 at 6:04 am

    >>>interpreting clues provided to him by friends he meets who are constantly on their cell phones.Hmm.? Seems like knock-off of the CBS series "Wisdom of the Crowd" which was a knock-off an Israeli TV series.? Which might actually make it a more enticing series because networks have no shamRead more

    >>>interpreting clues provided to him by friends he meets who are constantly on their cell phones.

    Hmm.? Seems like knock-off of the CBS series “Wisdom of the Crowd” which was a knock-off an Israeli TV series.? Which might actually make it a more enticing series because networks have no shame or hesitation to clone a successful series. (Which is why CBS cloned the Israeli series, right? Not to mention all the knock-offs of British TV series.)?

    Alas the CBS knock-off didn’t flourish in the ratings and then Jeremy Piven gave the network executives a reason pull the plug sooner rather than later.? So there’s that.

    The other hook is that he’s operating out of an “an illegal RV” which I take to mean he’s operating/living out of an illegally parked RV, one he has to keep moving to keep from having the RV impounded.? Which by itself could be the source of a running gag.

    Having to live/work out of an illegally parked RV is certainly relevant to the current housing crisis in California where most of the US television and film industry is still concentrated.? ?A crisis of too few units and too high rents and sale prices that has forced thousands of middle and lower class families into RV’s.? ?So there’s that as a positive — a timely news hook.

    As for being able to solve crimes while stoned , Sherlock Holmes puzzled out cases while indulging in his 7% solution — injecting cocaine.? Ergo the pitch proper and the pilot episode might benefit by citing? Holmes’ addiction.

    So I think the premise has potential.? But the logline and premise need a polish.

    fwiw

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