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  1. Posted: October 18, 2017In: Comedy

    JC a 10-year-old boy genius in Outback Australia overcomes life’s endless hardships and grows into a man solving his community’s problems using his great intellect. In the process, he becomes the towns, Wet and Dry Goods Merchant, Pharmacist, Dentist, Optometrist, Mayor, Honorary Anesthesiologist, and romances his Childhood sweetheart along the way.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on October 21, 2017 at 10:11 am

    Agreed with DPG and Foxtrot25. Even true stories need to be adapted for the screen, in other words, you'll need to take liberties with the 'facts' and change them to best fit a script. Is there one thing that he did that stood out from the rest? Or one thing he did that he is best known for? If not,Read more

    Agreed with DPG and Foxtrot25.

    Even true stories need to be adapted for the screen, in other words, you’ll need to take liberties with the ‘facts’ and change them to best fit a script.

    Is there one thing that he did that stood out from the rest? Or one thing he did that he is best known for? If not, is there something you can make up as a seminal achievement?

    On a side note, dyslexia is NOT a flaw. Most dyslexia is a result of a different brain structure to the norm, it’s not something the main character can overcome or control but learn to work within his or her life. I should know as I was diagnosed with Dyslexia and have been struggling with it for years, yet at the same time, my brain’s unique information processing has given me some advantages.

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  2. Posted: October 12, 2017In: Comedy

    A hard-headed teenager who dreams up the perfect movie idea must overcome his laziness and learn the logline formula to create a marketable script before he gets pimp-slapped by the impatient veterans of logline.it for posting without following the instructions on the left. (Block Comedy)

    Solace1016 Logliner
    Added an answer on October 16, 2017 at 7:34 am

    Genius!!!

    Genius!!!

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  3. Posted: October 10, 2017In: Comedy

    After her fathers death a trash-talking Brooklynite takes her family?s obsolete private detective agency into the modern age with the power of a smartphone. (Episodic Series)

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on October 11, 2017 at 8:33 am

    >>>using social media to solve her casesThis is similar to? the CBS drama "Crowdsourcing".? Which is a American knockoff of an Israeli series. So there's that problem in terms of coming with a differentiating gimmick for a new series.The logline/pitch for "Crowdsourcing" was:? "Inspired byRead more

    >>>using social media to solve her cases

    This is similar to? the CBS drama “Crowdsourcing”.? Which is a American knockoff of an Israeli series. So there’s that problem in terms of coming with a differentiating gimmick for a new series.

    The logline/pitch for “Crowdsourcing” was:? “Inspired by the notion that a million minds are better than one, a tech innovator creates a cutting edge crowdsourcing hub to solve his own daughter?s murder, as well as revolutionizing crime solving.?

    Notice that there is a specific inciting incident for launching the series in the pilot episode.? And it’s personal😕 the protagonist wants to solve the murder of his own daughter. I suggest one takeaway is that your protagonist needs a strong inciting incident and motivation, something more dramatic? than the fact that she happens to work in the family business.

    Oh, and in loglines character descriptions — yes; character names — no.?

    fwiw

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