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A hard-headed teenager who dreams up the perfect movie idea must overcome his laziness and learn the logline formula to create a marketable script before he gets pimp-slapped by the impatient veterans of logline.it for posting without following the instructions on the left. (Block Comedy)
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See lessAfter her fathers death a trash-talking Brooklynite takes her family?s obsolete private detective agency into the modern age with the power of a smartphone. (Episodic Series)
>>>using social media to solve her casesThis is similar to? the CBS drama "Crowdsourcing".? Which is a American knockoff of an Israeli series. So there's that problem in terms of coming with a differentiating gimmick for a new series.The logline/pitch for "Crowdsourcing" was:? "Inspired byRead more
>>>using social media to solve her cases
This is similar to? the CBS drama “Crowdsourcing”.? Which is a American knockoff of an Israeli series. So there’s that problem in terms of coming with a differentiating gimmick for a new series.
The logline/pitch for “Crowdsourcing” was:? “Inspired by the notion that a million minds are better than one, a tech innovator creates a cutting edge crowdsourcing hub to solve his own daughter?s murder, as well as revolutionizing crime solving.?
Notice that there is a specific inciting incident for launching the series in the pilot episode.? And it’s personal😕 the protagonist wants to solve the murder of his own daughter. I suggest one takeaway is that your protagonist needs a strong inciting incident and motivation, something more dramatic? than the fact that she happens to work in the family business.
Oh, and in loglines character descriptions — yes; character names — no.?
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See lessA bunch of kid had bought a limited edition candy together but only one person can eat it,so they started a fighting competition to win that candy
Yuen497, Much like your other posts, this one lacks an?inciting incident. A plot is a sequence of events and actions taken by a motivated character, the character's motivation is established by the inciting incident but is currently missing from this logline. Another problem with this concept is theRead more
Yuen497,
Much like your other posts, this one lacks an?inciting incident. A plot is a sequence of events and actions taken by a motivated character, the character’s motivation is established by the inciting incident but is currently missing from this logline. Another problem with this concept is the multiple protagonists, it’s best that you specify one main character for the story. Which one of the kids would be the main character?
Please read the ‘Rules’ section before posting again – you’re supposed to review two other loglines for every one you post, a rule you’ve neglected to abide by so far. As a result, any further posts will be deleted.? Other than that, I would guess that English is not your first language and suggest perhaps running the logline through a word processor for help with grammar and spelling. It would be very difficult for a producer to read past some of the rudimentary errors in this first attempt.
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