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A dracula who hates killing people for blood finds a companionship in a coward son of a gangster.
I do love the idea of this odd mix of genre characters. I echo most by saying to have an inciting incident and reason for them to need each other or meet each other at least.? The one I read in these comments is way to long and complex - tighten it and lighten it up I would suggest.? Like a 10 yearRead more
I do love the idea of this odd mix of genre characters. I echo most by saying to have an inciting incident and reason for them to need each other or meet each other at least.? The one I read in these comments is way to long and complex – tighten it and lighten it up I would suggest.? Like a 10 year would understand.? Keep at it on this one.
See lessan incurious uber driver wants to go home finds that his final pickup is a young terrorist with a ticking time bomb. so he use his skills to deliver him before it explodes.
My dark comedy take on this logline: an incurious uber driver wants to go home finds that his final pickup is a young terrorist with a ticking time bomb. so he drives his car to the bank that took his house?to deliver him as a gift.
My dark comedy take on this logline:
an incurious uber driver wants to go home finds that his final pickup is a young terrorist with a ticking time bomb. so he drives his car to the bank that took his house?to deliver him as a gift.
See lessA brilliant young woman-of-science disguises herself as a (male) witch-finder’s assistant so she can undermine the brutal practice of witch burning in spite of a greedy witch-finder who will not pardon any of the town?s witches. A musical comedy
Rather than "Woman of science", just say "A female scientist".And where and when is this set?>>>" who will not pardon any of the town?s witches"In other word's, he's merciless.The logline should frame the plot as a conflict between two people, ?the woman and the male witch-hunter rather thaRead more
Rather than “Woman of science”, just say “A female scientist”.
And where and when is this set?
>>>” who will not pardon any of the town?s witches”
In other word’s, he’s merciless.
The logline should frame the plot as a conflict between two people, ?the woman and the male witch-hunter rather than as a conflict between a woman and the practice of witch burning — and, oh, by the way, the prime instigator of the witch burning is a witch hunter. ?Establish a direct protagonist vs. antagonist relationship.
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