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Planet Spaceballs’ President Skroob sends Lord Dark Helmet to steal planet Druidia’s abundant supply of air to replenish their own, and only Lone Starr can stop them. SPACEBALLS
I think the logline should have been told from Lone Starr's perspective:When asked to rescue a Drewish princess from the dreaded Spaceballs, a cynical mercenary must learn the ways of the Schwartz in order to fight the Spaceballs army's evil commander.I'll admit, I chuckled when writing this...
I think the logline should have been told from Lone Starr’s perspective:
When asked to rescue a Drewish princess from the dreaded Spaceballs, a cynical mercenary must learn the ways of the Schwartz in order to fight the Spaceballs army’s evil commander.
I’ll admit, I chuckled when writing this…
See lessA young orphan boy in India receives a letter through which it is revealed that he has inherited some treasure which has been lying buried in his ancestral home in Pakistan. When he illegally reaches there he finds out that this old dilapidated burnt down house is now a terrorist camp .
This reads like a good setup, but what is his objective goal as a result of it? His actions are what's going to make this an interesting story, so best focus on his actions and goal - the essentials for a plot.
This reads like a good setup, but what is his objective goal as a result of it?
His actions are what’s going to make this an interesting story, so best focus on his actions and goal – the essentials for a plot.
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What happened to the logline?
What happened to the logline?
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