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All the King’s Women- When they become fed up with being one of the king’s many “fair maidens”, three wenches conspire to kill him, but when the queen dies and the king announces his plan to remarry, the three turn on each other as they vie to be the next lady of royalty.
Dpg I don't disagree with you. My only suggestion was to be a little more specific and that may help better convey the tone of the story. Like I said naming a particular contest isn't necessarily the way, but maybe something like: After?the queen dies, three wenches stop conspiring ?to kill the kingRead more
Dpg I don’t disagree with you. My only suggestion was to be a little more specific and that may help better convey the tone of the story. Like I said naming a particular contest isn’t necessarily the way, but maybe something like:
After?the queen dies, three wenches stop conspiring ?to kill the king and?concoct elaborate plans to win his favor and become the next queen. (25)
I think something like that is more likely to bring a more comedic, ridiculous?situation to mind.
Dhasitngs, is there a reason the protagonists are described as wenches rather than another position which would more obviously give the king reason to notice them?
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When a young Latina, Izel Madrid, finds out she descends from Aztec gods, she decides to join forces with the charmingly surly, shapeshifting detective, Elias Navarro, in order to fight supernatural crime and find out the truth about her lineage.
Agreed with the above, she needs a definitive event which motivates her to team up with the detective.?Currently this sounds like a series more than a film, if this is the case, the logline needs to serve a different purpose. Assuming it's a film she could be implicated in a murder, or been involvedRead more
Agreed with the above, she needs a definitive event which motivates her to team up with the detective.?Currently this sounds like a series more than a film, if this is the case, the logline needs to serve a different purpose. Assuming it’s a film she could be implicated in a murder, or been involved in a crime the detective is working on but her story does need a starting point. Secondly, her goal is unclear. What does “…find out the truth about her lineage…” in practical terms? Does it mean she wants to find her living relatives or debunk a myth? Whatever it is that drives her throughout her story, it needs to be clarified.
See lessWhen a Goth Detective is tasked with solving a murder at a very optimistic circus, he must solve the case to be able to escape the happiness.
But why Goth? Wouldn't it be better to identify with something else about tbis guy? Otherwise, this reads way better. Gj.
But why Goth? Wouldn’t it be better to identify with something else about tbis guy?
Otherwise, this reads way better. Gj.
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