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A young orphan boy in India receives a letter through which it is revealed that he has inherited some treasure which has been lying buried in his ancestral home in Pakistan. When he illegally reaches there he finds out that this old dilapidated burnt down house is now a terrorist camp .
This reads like a good setup, but what is his objective goal as a result of it? His actions are what's going to make this an interesting story, so best focus on his actions and goal - the essentials for a plot.
This reads like a good setup, but what is his objective goal as a result of it?
His actions are what’s going to make this an interesting story, so best focus on his actions and goal – the essentials for a plot.
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What happened to the logline?
What happened to the logline?
See lessAll the King’s Women- When they become fed up with being one of the king’s many “fair maidens”, three wenches conspire to kill him, but when the queen dies and the king announces his plan to remarry, the three turn on each other as they vie to be the next lady of royalty.
Dpg I don't disagree with you. My only suggestion was to be a little more specific and that may help better convey the tone of the story. Like I said naming a particular contest isn't necessarily the way, but maybe something like: After?the queen dies, three wenches stop conspiring ?to kill the kingRead more
Dpg I don’t disagree with you. My only suggestion was to be a little more specific and that may help better convey the tone of the story. Like I said naming a particular contest isn’t necessarily the way, but maybe something like:
After?the queen dies, three wenches stop conspiring ?to kill the king and?concoct elaborate plans to win his favor and become the next queen. (25)
I think something like that is more likely to bring a more comedic, ridiculous?situation to mind.
Dhasitngs, is there a reason the protagonists are described as wenches rather than another position which would more obviously give the king reason to notice them?
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