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  1. Posted: May 17, 2017In: Comedy

    When they plot to kill each other the following day, a white supremacist and a black racist rather wake up in each other’s body and must team up and solve the problem or get killed by their gang members.

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    Added an answer on May 18, 2017 at 10:38 pm

    Thanks so much Brothers for your insightful reviews. Very much appreciated.

    Thanks so much Brothers for your insightful reviews. Very much appreciated.

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  2. Posted: May 11, 2017In: Comedy

    Cutting ties with society, a overconfident young man embarks on a soul-searching solo hike into the canadian wilderness. He comes to the humble realization of his own inexperience as hostile weather sets in. To make matters worse, he runs into a girl stuck in a similar situation camped only a few yards away. As they reluctantly join forces to survive the storm, they swallow their pride and come to the humbling conclusion that perhaps they aren’t as mature, independent or unique as they thought, and that maybe soul searching ventures aren’t as grandiose or successful as books led them to believe. (Short Film)

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    Way, way, way too long. As above 101 words. Use the above 'Formula' direction or search online for samples, many sites have them.

    Way, way, way too long. As above 101 words. Use the above ‘Formula’ direction or search online for samples, many sites have them.

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  3. Posted: May 9, 2017In: Comedy

    An awkward, young man attempts to dissuade his imaginary friend from accompanying him on a first date, only to find he’s not the only one with an overactive imagination.

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    Added an answer on May 9, 2017 at 9:21 pm

    >>Do you really need to clarify what?s at stake on a first date? Isn?t that self explanatory? Perhaps. ?But because he's socially awkward, maybe he would want his imaginary friend along ?to ease the tension, to help him overcome his awkwardness. IOW: I don't see what particular problem havingRead more

    >>Do you really need to clarify what?s at stake on a first date? Isn?t that self explanatory?

    Perhaps. ?But because he’s socially awkward, maybe he would want his imaginary friend along ?to ease the tension, to help him overcome his awkwardness. IOW: I don’t see what particular problem having his imaginary friend along creates. ?Particular in this situation as distinct from the general problem of having an imaginary friend who ?subs for a real one.

    Nor do I see what particular problem is created by his date bringing along an imaginary friend. ?I can guess what the problem might be, but I shouldn’t have to guess; the logline should inform me. ?Your logline sets up a situation that I imagine can go in any number of directions. ?But it’s not my story. ?I want to know what is the specific direction you intend to take with this situation, the particular plot you have in your imagination.

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