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When the parents are detained by weather abroad, a man-child elder brother must take charge of his dysfunctional family’s Christmas customs.
Your logline isn't bad, however, I would personalize 'the parents' with, 'his parents' or 'their parents' Here is an attempt at a re-write: ----- "When his parent's flight is delayed, a man-child elder brother must take charge of his dysfunctional family's Christmas." ------ Hope that helped
Your logline isn’t bad, however, I would personalize ‘the parents’ with, ‘his parents’ or ‘their parents’
Here is an attempt at a re-write:
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“When his parent’s flight is delayed, a man-child elder brother must take charge of his dysfunctional family’s Christmas.”
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Hope that helped
A teenage girl discovers a talking cat only to find out she must return him to his owners in 1970s Stockholm.
Is this a time travel movie? Also, please say why she needs to return the cat?
Is this a time travel movie? Also, please say why she needs to return the cat?
See lessA young woman decides to follow her sister’s footsteps into the music industry gets derailed when she gets in a car accident.
Anything you could describe the young woman as, instead of young, that alludes to a flaw that will be fixed? What caused her to decide? The logline reads more like an inciting incident/catalyst than a logline itself. It might start something like "When a delusional songwriter gets in a car accident,Read more
Anything you could describe the young woman as, instead of young, that alludes to a flaw that will be fixed? What caused her to decide? The logline reads more like an inciting incident/catalyst than a logline itself. It might start something like “When a delusional songwriter gets in a car accident, she has to x to avoid y or z will happen.
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