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Thirty five year old toy designer John who hates kids gets a chance to design toys for one of the best toy manufacturing company under the super vision of four year old Sara.
The logline sets up an interesting situation for the adult character -- but fails to give to him a plot, There is no indication where the story is going to go with the setup.Given the situation he finds himself in, what must ?he about it? ? Or else -- what are the stakes?If he's the protagonist thenRead more
The logline sets up an interesting situation for the adult character — but fails to give to him a plot, There is no indication where the story is going to go with the setup.
Given the situation he finds himself in, what must ?he about it? ? Or else — what are the stakes?
If he’s the protagonist then he needs to have a proactive role in pursuit of an objective goal. ?What is that goal?
See lessWhen his grandmother sets him up with a man they?ve just met, an architect must decide between a loveless relationship and reinventing himself to complete The Playground and reclaim himself ? and the man he loves.
Agree with Nir Shelter that in the romance genre there's got to be a seemingly insuperable obstacle that stands in the way of true love. ?In this case, the obstacle appears to be internal. But film is a visual medium so all internal conflicts and obstacles must be shown ?-- there has to be an externRead more
Agree with Nir Shelter that in the romance genre there’s got to be a seemingly insuperable obstacle that stands in the way of true love. ?In this case, the obstacle appears to be internal.
But film is a visual medium so all internal conflicts and obstacles must be shown ?– there has to be an external representation of the obstacle. The indecisiveness is not the problem; it’s a a symptom of the deeper problem, the obstacle. What is that obstacle?
See lessWhen his grandmother encourages a stranger to ?upset his canoe?, an architect must decide between a loveless relationship and reinventing himself to complete The Playground and claim the life – and love – he subconsciously craves.
What about this: When his grandmother sets him up with a man they?ve just met, an architect must decide between a loveless relationship and reinventing himself to complete The Playground and reclaim himself ? and the man he loves.
What about this:
When his grandmother sets him up with a man they?ve just met, an architect must decide between a loveless relationship and reinventing himself to complete The Playground and reclaim himself ? and the man he loves.
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