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  1. Posted: April 30, 2017In: Comedy

    When his grandmother encourages a stranger to ?upset his canoe?, an architect must decide between a loveless relationship and reinventing himself to complete The Playground and claim the life – and love – he subconsciously craves.

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    Added an answer on May 1, 2017 at 9:00 am

    What about this: When his grandmother sets him up with a man they?ve just met, an architect must decide between a loveless relationship and reinventing himself to complete The Playground and reclaim himself ? and the man he loves.

    What about this:

    When his grandmother sets him up with a man they?ve just met, an architect must decide between a loveless relationship and reinventing himself to complete The Playground and reclaim himself ? and the man he loves.

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  2. Posted: April 29, 2017In: Comedy

    When her main bread winner is fired, a maverick celebrity agent must battle her industry rivals and reinvent herself to save her business from impending financial ruin.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on April 29, 2017 at 12:40 pm

    I don't think the plot should be to re-invent herself. It should be to re-invent the client who was fired. After all, now that her client is fired it will be up to her to get him a new job.

    I don’t think the plot should be to re-invent herself. It should be to re-invent the client who was fired. After all, now that her client is fired it will be up to her to get him a new job.

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  3. Posted: April 28, 2017In: Comedy

    With her main bread winner in rehab, and now facing bankruptcy, former child star sensation turned celebrity agent, Dolcie Dunn, must battle her industry rivals, scandal and a dysfunctional family to save her sanity and her business from financial ruin.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on April 28, 2017 at 6:56 pm

    I suggest you study the recommendations in the 'Formula' tab. There is no need to mention a character's name and the word count should be 30 or under. Other than that, what is it the MC specifically wants? Her goal is unclear from the descriptions as they mention her wanting to save her sanity and hRead more

    I suggest you study the recommendations in the ‘Formula’ tab. There is no need to mention a character’s name and the word count should be 30 or under.

    Other than that, what is it the MC specifically wants? Her goal is unclear from the descriptions as they mention her wanting to save her sanity and her business, but which one is it that drives the plot?

    The back story of what she was prior to being an agent is irrelevant and can be cut, what is missing, however, is the inciting incident. What specifically was the single event that motivated her to take action at the start of the story?

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