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When his life unravels, a selfish, high school Jock is given a chance of redemption when he starts visualizing the desires of anyone he touches. p.s I’m trying something a bit different … 2 log lines based on the same premise. This one is a comeuppance tale of Jerk transformed to Good Guy. The next submission is Loser to Hero…. Your thoughts on both or either please. And which transformation do you prefer? which logline is the most ironic?
One more thing, you say he is given a chance at redemption... I would add who is it that gives him the chance for redemption in the logline.
One more thing, you say he is given a chance at redemption… I would add who is it that gives him the chance for redemption in the logline.
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WEREBEAR When a Transphobic Baptist schoolteacher learns her father is?the half man/ half bear that accidentally?slaughtered?their family, she must team up with a flamboyant transsexual scientist to convince the shy ?monster?to become the high school's mascot in a last minute effort to trap?the WereRead more
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When a Transphobic Baptist schoolteacher learns her father is?the half man/ half bear that accidentally?slaughtered?their family, she must team up with a flamboyant transsexual scientist to convince the shy ?monster?to become the high school’s mascot in a last minute effort to trap?the Werebear?before?it kills the entire town
See lessA whiny arrogant owner of a store is being visited by three different spirits in order for him to preserve and save his relations with his closed ones.
Agreed with the above. Is there a specific event that happens or action he does that makes the spirits visit him? You could make t so as a result of him doing one selfish act the spirits decide he needs to learn a lesson - in other words give him an inciting incident instead of a random visit for beRead more
Agreed with the above.
Is there a specific event that happens or action he does that makes the spirits visit him? You could make t so as a result of him doing one selfish act the spirits decide he needs to learn a lesson – in other words give him an inciting incident instead of a random visit for being a douche.
On? a side note, like Richiev I think this needs a distinctive element to help it stand out from the many other stories of a similar premise.
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