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A whiny arrogant owner of a store is being visited by three different spirits in order for him to preserve and save his relations with his closed ones.
Agreed with the above. Is there a specific event that happens or action he does that makes the spirits visit him? You could make t so as a result of him doing one selfish act the spirits decide he needs to learn a lesson - in other words give him an inciting incident instead of a random visit for beRead more
Agreed with the above.
Is there a specific event that happens or action he does that makes the spirits visit him? You could make t so as a result of him doing one selfish act the spirits decide he needs to learn a lesson – in other words give him an inciting incident instead of a random visit for being a douche.
On? a side note, like Richiev I think this needs a distinctive element to help it stand out from the many other stories of a similar premise.
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I'm always for simplification, however, in this instance, I still fail to see the cause and effect connecting the inciting incident and goal. Him getting these powers out of the blue doesn't logically connect with him needing to find true love. What does true love mean? Must he be married? Engaged?Read more
I’m always for simplification, however, in this instance, I still fail to see the cause and effect connecting the inciting incident and goal. Him getting these powers out of the blue doesn’t logically connect with him needing to find true love. What does true love mean? Must he be married? Engaged? Committed? Love is subjective and even in the fairy tails requires a symbolic act of some sort, what’s his?
Lastly, what’s at stake? So what if he visualizes other people’s desires, is that a bad thing? What does he have to lose that forces him to make a deal with the devil?
See lessA father and the estranged daughter he seeks to reconnect with accompany an affluent friend to a secret restaurant. The father is horrified to learn the restaurant serves nothing but human meat, and must find a way to cope while protecting his daughter’s innocence.
Father and daughter reconnecting is a good base for a story and can make for an interesting film, however, the cannibalism feels like it's tacked on as a click bate device more than a plot necessity. If cannibalism was somehow a part of their lives then it would fit in better, right now it feels likRead more
Father and daughter reconnecting is a good base for a story and can make for an interesting film, however, the cannibalism feels like it’s tacked on as a click bate device more than a plot necessity. If cannibalism was somehow a part of their lives then it would fit in better, right now it feels like an external add on for ‘crazy’ effect.
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