1. Posted: January 28, 2017In:

    After forgetting to bring Vegemite a group of tourists in the Australian bush land are set upon by carnivorous drop bears and must find a way to survive.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    I am an Aussie and this can't be a real post. Possibly a hangover from Australia Day.

    I am an Aussie and this can’t be a real post. Possibly a hangover from Australia Day.

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  2. Posted: January 28, 2017In:

    Two dim-witted best friends battle the internet and their conservative town to keep their porn shop open.

    Eethan Samurai

    Hi CLSmith, Your idea has a lot of potential. The logline itself has room for improvement though. An inciting incident appears to be missing. You already have two ideal obstacles in the way of your MCs. What?exactly?do those forces do?that makes the MCs battle for their porn shop? And maybe considerRead more

    Hi CLSmith,

    Your idea has a lot of potential. The logline itself has room for improvement though.

    An inciting incident appears to be missing. You already have two ideal obstacles in the way of your MCs. What?exactly?do those forces do?that makes the MCs battle for their porn shop?

    And maybe consider making the “internet” and conservative town into one antagonistic force or entity. Like a technophobe Mayor who’s determined to quell your MCs’ internet erotica endeavors.

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  3. Posted: January 10, 2017In:

    Desperate to make money, Tyler impersonates his twin sister taking her job as an Ubher driver. With Ryley as his passenger, the two hit a series of road bumps along the way that makes a trip from the San Fernando Valley to Los Angeles much longer than expected.

    RussellN Samurai

    It seems a bit disconnected - is Ryley his sister or his Ubher passenger? ?It does have?a good?amount of implied questions to intrigue.

    It seems a bit disconnected – is Ryley his sister or his Ubher passenger? ?It does have?a good?amount of implied questions to intrigue.

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