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  1. Posted: December 29, 2016In: Comedy

    A perfectionist Youtube star’s page views plummet when she falls for a hang loose gamer geek. Their PDA insecurities and her scheming manager threaten to ctrl+alt+delete their dreams to go public with their “In a relationship” status.

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    Added an answer on January 4, 2017 at 9:25 pm

    After a breakup with her boyfriend YouTube co-star she must decide between failing viewers and true love or a relationship with loveless good career choice put forward by her manager. Long winded, but I'll keep working on it.

    After a breakup with her boyfriend YouTube co-star she must decide between failing viewers and true love or a relationship with loveless good career choice put forward by her manager.

    Long winded, but I’ll keep working on it.

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  2. Posted: December 17, 2016In: Comedy

    In tradition of the French new wave films of the 60s, a young tap-gamer struggles with success and relationship strain after a conglomerate buys his game, while the conglomerate chairman frames an African American trash-man for his recent statuiatory rape lawsuit.

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    Added an answer on December 31, 2016 at 5:24 pm

    Tap-game = a smartphone game that you tap? So is the main character a tap game developer and he made a lot of money selling his game to a big company? If so I think "a young tap game developer" would better describe the MC. Also a better adjective would help. "A brilliant tap game developer"?"A dyslRead more

    Tap-game = a smartphone game that you tap?

    So is the main character a tap game developer and he made a lot of money selling his game to a big company?

    If so I think “a young tap game developer” would better describe the MC.

    Also a better adjective would help. “A brilliant tap game developer”?”A dyslexic tap game developer” etc. S

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  3. Posted: December 3, 2016In: Comedy

    PALEO When her boss at a wild game restaurant turns into a Neanderthal, a vegetarian waitress must solve the puzzle of evolution to escape with her life.

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    Added an answer on December 24, 2016 at 10:56 pm

    This is a good concept in my opinion. It's not clear why the waitress should help his boss (can't she just run away?) - anyway I think there are many ways to upgrade this logline, it just needs some work. Good job! And good luck!

    This is a good concept in my opinion. It’s not clear why the waitress should help his boss (can’t she just run away?) – anyway I think there are many ways to upgrade this logline, it just needs some work. Good job! And good luck!

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