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Two dim-witted best friends battle the internet and their conservative town to keep their porn shop open.
Hi CLSmith, Your idea has a lot of potential. The logline itself has room for improvement though. An inciting incident appears to be missing. You already have two ideal obstacles in the way of your MCs. What?exactly?do those forces do?that makes the MCs battle for their porn shop? And maybe considerRead more
Hi CLSmith,
Your idea has a lot of potential. The logline itself has room for improvement though.
An inciting incident appears to be missing. You already have two ideal obstacles in the way of your MCs. What?exactly?do those forces do?that makes the MCs battle for their porn shop?
And maybe consider making the “internet” and conservative town into one antagonistic force or entity. Like a technophobe Mayor who’s determined to quell your MCs’ internet erotica endeavors.
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Desperate to make money, Tyler impersonates his twin sister taking her job as an Ubher driver. With Ryley as his passenger, the two hit a series of road bumps along the way that makes a trip from the San Fernando Valley to Los Angeles much longer than expected.
It seems a bit disconnected - is Ryley his sister or his Ubher passenger? ?It does have?a good?amount of implied questions to intrigue.
It seems a bit disconnected – is Ryley his sister or his Ubher passenger? ?It does have?a good?amount of implied questions to intrigue.
See lessA perfectionist Youtube star’s page views plummet when she falls for a hang loose gamer geek. Their PDA insecurities and her scheming manager threaten to ctrl+alt+delete their dreams to go public with their “In a relationship” status.
After a breakup with her boyfriend YouTube co-star she must decide between failing viewers and true love or a relationship with loveless good career choice put forward by her manager. Long winded, but I'll keep working on it.
After a breakup with her boyfriend YouTube co-star she must decide between failing viewers and true love or a relationship with loveless good career choice put forward by her manager.
Long winded, but I’ll keep working on it.
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