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In tradition of the French new wave films of the 60s, a young tap-gamer struggles with success and relationship strain after a conglomerate buys his game, while the conglomerate chairman frames an African American trash-man for his recent statuiatory rape lawsuit.
Tap-game = a smartphone game that you tap? So is the main character a tap game developer and he made a lot of money selling his game to a big company? If so I think "a young tap game developer" would better describe the MC. Also a better adjective would help. "A brilliant tap game developer"?"A dyslRead more
Tap-game = a smartphone game that you tap?
So is the main character a tap game developer and he made a lot of money selling his game to a big company?
If so I think “a young tap game developer” would better describe the MC.
Also a better adjective would help. “A brilliant tap game developer”?”A dyslexic tap game developer” etc. S
See lessPALEO When her boss at a wild game restaurant turns into a Neanderthal, a vegetarian waitress must solve the puzzle of evolution to escape with her life.
This is a good concept in my opinion. It's not clear why the waitress should help his boss (can't she just run away?) - anyway I think there are many ways to upgrade this logline, it just needs some work. Good job! And good luck!
This is a good concept in my opinion. It’s not clear why the waitress should help his boss (can’t she just run away?) – anyway I think there are many ways to upgrade this logline, it just needs some work. Good job! And good luck!
See lessWhen hunting season nears for the 20th time in his career, a miserable assassin enrolls in his pregnant wife?s yoga and pilates class to rediscover a desire to kill.
I think this would be an interesting movie to watch. I quite like it. However, I can't quite understand the first part of the logline, has he not been able to kill all along in the previous seasons that he has to rediscover the desire? Because that is how it sounds to me. Or is he desperate becauseRead more
I think this would be an interesting movie to watch. I quite like it.
See lessHowever, I can’t quite understand the first part of the logline, has he not been able to kill all along in the previous seasons that he has to rediscover the desire? Because that is how it sounds to me. Or is he desperate because for this season the desire is just not coming? Does the pregnancy play any part in this journey in a more antagonistic way? because if not maybe you should remove it. The objective goal though is very clear and works.