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When he learns his mom has only months to live, a self-absorbed, corporate executive must find his estranged siblings to re-create childhood photos so they make a final gift to their mother before she dies.
This sounds like it has the makings for a nice drama, but I could also see it making a nice comedy - depends on how you choose to swing it.I think best to define the inciting incident in more concrete terms - After his mother is given a month to live...It is a relatively low stakes premise. If theyRead more
This sounds like it has the makings for a nice drama, but I could also see it making a nice comedy – depends on how you choose to swing it.
I think best to define the inciting incident in more concrete terms – After his mother is given a month to live…
It is a relatively low stakes premise. If they fail the mother dies with no visual reference of their childhood, if they succeed she sees some photos – she is no better or worst off either way.
What if, as a result of her condition,? she lost all her memory of their childhood? Now, instead of showing her something she’s already seen, the siblings have a month to give her back her memory’s of their times together.
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As Nir Shelter said. ?At 59 words in length this logline is too long and too confusing to figure out. ?A logline needs to be ?concise statement ?that clearly informs a reader what the story is about. Further, a plot is not about having to make this or that decision -- two hours of ?a protagonist vacRead more
As Nir Shelter said. ?At 59 words in length this logline is too long and too confusing to figure out. ?A logline needs to be ?concise statement ?that clearly informs a reader what the story is about.
Further, a plot is not about having to make this or that decision — two hours of ?a protagonist vacillating with indecision ? A plot is about a protagonist who as a result of an inciting incident makes a decision to pursue a specific objective goal, and how that pursuit plays out, right or wrong, for better or worse.
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After being publicly ridiculed by the President of the United States, a vain businessman gets the last laugh by succeeding him in the White House. (25 words)The real life drama has got it all: ?inciting incident, protagonist versus antagonist, character flaw, objective goal, personal and global stakRead more
After being publicly ridiculed by the President of the United States, a vain businessman gets the last laugh by succeeding him in the White House.
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The real life drama has got it all: ?inciting incident, protagonist versus antagonist, character flaw, objective goal, personal and global stakes. ?And if you had pitched this 2 years ago, the concept would have been DOA. ?But now it’s only a matter of time before it becomes a bio-pic.
And btw, that’s an historically plausible inciting incident for the plot. Check out clips on YouTube of Obama ridiculing Trump at the 2011 White House Correspondents’ Dinner.
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