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  1. Posted: September 3, 2016In: Comedy

    A retired couple’s tranquil life is shaken by the sudden death of their best friend. Now they must go on a road trip across Europe to scatter his ashes before the imminent birth of their first grandchild. A series of misadventures and encounters challenge their marriage and identities.

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    Added an answer on September 4, 2016 at 5:58 pm

    THank you for your feedback! Will work on it more.

    THank you for your feedback! Will work on it more.

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  2. Posted: September 2, 2016In: Comedy

    After making his “brain-power-boosting” mixture,a wannabe chemist drinks it,shrinking instead into a little man,who decides to read people?s diaries but reads one which lands him into serious trouble.

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    Added an answer on September 3, 2016 at 9:56 pm

    I appreciate your reviews,bros.Thanks so much. @dpg The diaries are the old book ones. I get your points.There must be a correlation. I ?will work on that. @ Richies He shrinks to an action figure size and sneaks in to read.

    I appreciate your reviews,bros.Thanks so much.

    dpg
    The diaries are the old book ones.
    I get your points.There must be a correlation.
    I ?will work on that.

    @ Richies
    He shrinks to an action figure size and sneaks in
    to read.

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  3. Posted: August 29, 2016In: Comedy

    In order to fit in, a group of fresh-faced college students join a quirky, offbeat club about spreading positivity that regularly forces them out of their comfort zones.

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    Added an answer on August 30, 2016 at 10:37 pm

    Mac17:I suggest "Desperate to fit in..." rather than "In order to fit in..." in order to establish the intensity of her need. ?And "driven but socially inept..." (or something similar) rather than just "driven..." because ?"driven" alone doesn't convey a sense of the character flaw that motivates heRead more

    Mac17:

    I suggest “Desperate to fit in…” rather than “In order to fit in…” in order to establish the intensity of her need. ?And “driven but socially inept…” (or something similar) rather than just “driven…” because ?”driven” alone doesn’t convey a sense of the character flaw that motivates her action to form the club — and the flaw that threatens to frustrate her efforts at every turn.

    I’m not sure how ?”spreading positivity” translates into specific scenes and incidents. ?Could you give me a few examples.

    And is “forcing members into awkward social situations” a conscious intention, or an unintended consequence?

    To address CraigDGriffiths review, ?it seems to me that the stakes are clear and legitimate and important to the characters. ?The misfits are desperate to find social acceptance by their peers.

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