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After a newly engaged woman realizes she has no friends to invite to her wedding, she sets out to make some adult friendships while balancing a crappy job and her own awkwardness.
All points have been made that I could mate, they even made one last year called?The Wedding Ringer?with Kevin Hart last year which also follows a similar premise. You definitely need to tell us your hook, what made you interested in this movie and made you HAVE to write this logline down. Hope thisRead more
All points have been made that I could mate, they even made one last year called?The Wedding Ringer?with Kevin Hart last year which also follows a similar premise. You definitely need to tell us your hook, what made you interested in this movie and made you HAVE to write this logline down. Hope this helps.
See less[Revised] A manipulative cat uses trickery and the dark arts to exact revenge upon an unappreciative mother, disrupting her big presentation.
Everyone above has made great points so I'll help you out with a quick rewrite to get you on your way:When her mother turns her into a cat as a punishment, a supernatural girl tries to exact revenge on her while adapting to her new body.?Hope this helps.?
Everyone above has made great points so I’ll help you out with a quick rewrite to get you on your way:
When her mother turns her into a cat as a punishment, a supernatural girl tries to exact revenge on her while adapting to her new body.?
Hope this helps.?
See lessRevised Logline……When an introverted player from a footy obsessed family, is cut from the team, he joins the cheerleading squad, despite being bullied, he competes at the National Championships, losing his chance of a scholarship but gaining the love of his life.
The revised logline presents little action and little conflict - he joins a cheerleading squad, after a bit of bullying he competes at the nationals and then he falls in love. What's stopping him? What obstacles MUST he over come? In addition the stakes are low (maybe I'm missing something) what's tRead more
The revised logline presents little action and little conflict – he joins a cheerleading squad, after a bit of bullying he competes at the nationals and then he falls in love. What’s stopping him? What obstacles MUST he over come?
In addition the stakes are low (maybe I’m missing something) what’s the worst that would happen should he fail as a cheerleader?
Biggest problem with this concept is it lacks a clear unifying goal, what is it the MC wants? Is it to win the cheerleading championships? Is it to find love? Is it the scholarship?
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