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REVISED: A casino waitress is in love with the scientist who accidentally made her three times bigger, but while her size leads to Vegas stardom, she must also face a blackmailing mobster and rescue the kidnapped scientist.
Here's a one-page synopsis for STAND TALL! that might better provide logline suggestions: file:///home/chronos/u-9600f2f96a654d29e2087168927467c74d89db09/Downloads/071716%20stand%20tall%20logline%252Fsynopsis.pdf
Here’s a one-page synopsis for STAND TALL! that might better provide logline suggestions:
file:///home/chronos/u-9600f2f96a654d29e2087168927467c74d89db09/Downloads/071716%20stand%20tall%20logline%252Fsynopsis.pdf
See less(REVISED) When an antisocial apocalypse ?prepper? is the only person in her small town uninfected by a virus transmitted through the trial of a ?telepathic phone?, she must stop preparing for the world?s end and start saving it.
"When a virus spreads through a small town making everyone dangerously impulsive, an apocalypse ?prepper? must stop preparing for the world?s end and find a cure to save her town." Better. But cut some words out. Example:?When a deadly virus infects her small town, an apocalypse prepper must find aRead more
“When a virus spreads through a small town making everyone dangerously impulsive, an apocalypse ?prepper? must stop preparing for the world?s end and find a cure to save her town.”
Better. But cut some words out.
Example:?When a deadly virus infects her small town, an apocalypse prepper must find a way to cure it and stop it from spreading.?(~23 words)
But what specifically does she do? In my earlier example, I said use the supplies she’s hoarded. Is it something similar? Must she find an uninfected doctor? What is it?
See lessAn arrogant, popular high school homophobe, plagued by a series of bizarre electrical mishaps, struggles to overcome what he believes is a curse and, after he discovers a conspiracy that threatens their town, must work with gay and lesbian teen witches who despise him. [One-hour primetime series, Veronica Mars meets Charmed]
The latest draft of this logline adds more adjectives, but not detail and plot points. As DPG said, the super power he gets is unclear and as a super hero story it needs to be very clear. Secondly I still don't see the connection between the elements you're describing: The MC getting super-powers doRead more
The latest draft of this logline adds more adjectives, but not detail and plot points.
As DPG said, the super power he gets is unclear and as a super hero story it needs to be very clear.
Secondly I still don’t see the connection between the elements you’re describing:
See lessThe MC getting super-powers doesn’t relate to the discovery of a conspiracy, a conspiracy doesn’t necessarily mean a threat to a whole town, the threat doesn’t relate to a group of gay and lesbian teenagers and their being gay and lesbians doesn’t relate to their magic powers.
Lastly, what does he NEED to achieve in this first episode, and how will a group of teenage magicians help him achieve this goal?