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An arrogant, popular high school bully discovers ? but can?t control ? strengthening-yet-unpredictable powers and is branded an outcast which compels him to work with a coven of gay and lesbian teen witches to uncover a conspiracy that threatens their town.
I agree that even though the concept is for a series, the logline should describe a plot for the pilot episode. You obviously disagree about my suggestion that the logline ?would be more effective with a clear description of the superpowers. ?Good luck, if that's the way you want to do it. ?(IMHO ,Read more
I agree that even though the concept is for a series, the logline should describe a plot for the pilot episode.
You obviously disagree about my suggestion that the logline ?would be more effective with a clear description of the superpowers. ?Good luck, if that’s the way you want to do it. ?(IMHO , you’ll need it.)
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Trimmed down, leaner and easier to read - ti's much of an improvement. Struggles great, but to what end? Her decision will constitute a single scene in act one, what will be her main action in act two? What is her over arching goal in the A plot?
Trimmed down, leaner and easier to read – ti’s much of an improvement.
Struggles great, but to what end?
Her decision will constitute a single scene in act one, what will be her main action in act two? What is her over arching goal in the A plot?
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And then what happens? ?The logline sets up a 1st Act situation but has no 2nd Act ?plot.As a result of falling in love for the "ladykiller", ?what becomes the woman's objective goal? ?What becomes the dramatic problem? ? What difference does it make to the actress as to how the relationship works oRead more
And then what happens? ?The logline sets up a 1st Act situation but has no 2nd Act ?plot.
As a result of falling in love for the “ladykiller”, ?what becomes the woman’s objective goal? ?What becomes the dramatic problem? ? What difference does it make to the actress as to how the relationship works out? ?Or to the audience — why should they care or be interested in what happens? ?What’s at stake?
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