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After being exiled from her clan, a nymph seeks out her absent father in a populated, modern city.
Hi Hannikkis... I gather that by nymph and modern city you're setting up a?mythological character in present times, however I'm not sure what abilities or qualities would make them out of place and give them a fish-out-of-water aspect. For example in Splash (remake announced by the way) the mythologRead more
Hi Hannikkis…
I gather that by nymph and modern city you’re setting up a?mythological character in present times, however I’m not sure what abilities or qualities would make them out of place and give them a fish-out-of-water aspect. For example in Splash (remake announced by the way) the mythological character was literally a fish out of water and her ability to communicate?with sea creatures , producer super sonic sounds and turn into a fish gave her unusual encounters. Nymphs were spirits of nature that contradicted the strict conventions of high society, however nowadays I dare say they?would come across as a typical teenagers. What if this was set during Victorian times, a nymph?would stick and surely produce a few awkward moments.
Also her being exiled doesn’t necessarily and directly connect to her needing to find her father. What if her mother dies and she must find her father to let him know, or something to that effect where by it motivates her to need to find the father or else.
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Agreed with the above. I had to read it a few times just to get my head around what happens and to whom. Best to re think this concept with one main character and one goal.
Agreed with the above.
I had to read it a few times just to get my head around what happens and to whom.
Best to re think this concept with one main character and one goal.
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The concept, while interesting, begs a question: ?how did this hybrid species comes to be?It seems to me that although this is a comedy, the friendship needs a stronger motivation. ?Maybe something relating to the half-and-half's origins. ?Like maybe, he makes friends with the boy because he needs hRead more
The concept, while interesting, begs a question: ?how did this hybrid species comes to be?
It seems to me that although this is a comedy, the friendship needs a stronger motivation. ?Maybe something relating to the half-and-half’s origins. ?Like maybe, he makes friends with the boy because he needs his help to find his genetic-engineer maker for some reason.
I dunno. Other than that the friendship should be more than incidental bonding . ?It should be motivated by a desperate need.
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