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A cynical programmer gets more than she bargained for when she joins signs up for her own company’s dating app. Torn between her reservations on commitment and the potential for something worthwhile, she must determine for herself if her “perfect match” is exactly that.
Best if you look at the ideal structure for a logline at the 'Training' tab on the top bar. A few points to get you started though: Less is more - 30 words or under are ideal lengths for loglines. Best to describe a plot as appose to only the emotional stakes for a character, this means an event thaRead more
Best if you look at the ideal structure for a logline at the ‘Training’ tab on the top bar.
A few points to get you started though:
Less is more – 30 words or under are ideal lengths for loglines.
Best to describe a plot as appose to only the emotional stakes for a character, this means an event that starts the story and a goal.
See lessThe spawn of a nasty divorce, an arrogantly argumentative teen attends a new school. When senior pranksters torment him, he forms his own clique to counterattack their antics.
The back story description in the logline is unnecessary. Here it is again with out the backstory: After senior pranksters torment him, a troubled teenager forms his own clique to counterattack their antics.This is missing a description of how he intends to counterattack, in other words the goal shoRead more
The back story description in the logline is unnecessary.
Here it is again with out the backstory:
After senior pranksters torment him, a troubled teenager forms his own clique to counterattack their antics.
This is missing a description of how he intends to counterattack, in other words the goal should be described in the logline. Perhaps even describe in more detail the specifics of his public humiliation so we better understand his motivation for revenge, in other words clarify what the inciting incident actually was.
See lessA down on his luck bounty hunter becomes the star of his own reality TV show, but fame is not all it’s cracked up to be, and could even stop him from catching his long time nemesis.
This sounds like a good premise for a comedy, but the plot is vague. What does "...fame is not all it?s cracked up to be?" mean? This sounds like the inciting incident, but lacks detail. What is it that happens to him specifically??Ideally this would relate to his goal of catching the nemesis.
This sounds like a good premise for a comedy, but the plot is vague.
What does “…fame is not all it?s cracked up to be?” mean? This sounds like the inciting incident, but lacks detail. What is it that happens to him specifically??Ideally this would relate to his goal of catching the nemesis.
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