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When an Animal Talent Agency has only 48 hours to find the right talent for a psychotic client or face demise, a flamboyant receptionist obsessed with making his dog a star sees an opportunity. He ?just? has to convince the mid divorce agent, win the client?s heart and train his pooch to overcome stage fright.
I've moved the problem to front - difficult movie star needs a dog. Then moved the hero's plan next. Then added the conflicts and time constraint. Also, this might just be me, but I tend to remove descriptive words that don't carry the story, like mid divorce agent - even if the boss being middle-agRead more
I’ve moved the problem to front – difficult movie star needs a dog. Then moved the hero’s plan next. Then added the conflicts and time constraint. Also, this might just be me, but I tend to remove descriptive words that don’t carry the story, like mid divorce agent – even if the boss being middle-aged and?divorced is a primary conflict for the hero, I still don’t think it’s strong enough reason to add in a logline. Last, I assume you mean gay when you say flamboyant which gay imho makes for a cleaner line.
When a difficult movie star needs a dog for a movie, the animal talent agency?s gay receptionist sees his chance to get his pooch into pictures, but he only has two days to convince his boss, win over the movie star, and train his shy pooch.
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Because it's a comedy, ?I am more willing to suspend disbelief on how the story is set up. My primary question is: ?so what? ?What's at stake? ?What is the story trying to show, to say about religion that ?would make it worthwhile for me to invest some of my precious time and limited money in watchiRead more
Because it’s a comedy, ?I am more willing to suspend disbelief on how the story is set up.
My primary question is: ?so what? ?What’s at stake? ?What is the story trying to show, to say about religion that ?would make it worthwhile for me to invest some of my precious time and limited money in watching this movie? What’s the dramatic point? ?What theme are you ?trying explore that I might find amusing, if not enlightening?
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Like, Nir Shelter I prefer that writers post revisions in the thread of a logline rather than posting ?the revision as a new logline. ?It facilitates continuity of ?discussion.And also think the logline is cluttered with too many "objective goals". ?And I put objective goals in quotes because they rRead more
Like, Nir Shelter I prefer that writers post revisions in the thread of a logline rather than posting ?the revision as a new logline. ?It facilitates continuity of ?discussion.
And also think the logline is cluttered with too many “objective goals”. ?And I put objective goals in quotes because they really aren’t objective goals. ?They are ways and means to obtain the singular objective goal: ?save the company.?
And I also concur with Nir Shelter that ?”flamboyant” is extraneous. ?While it may be a defining characteristic of the character it doesn’t seem to be a relevant characteristic ?to the dramatic problem; IOW: ?it’s not a character flaw that poses a threat, an obstacle to the character obtaining his objective goal.
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