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A rookie hitman and a contract killer are next on the hit-list after taking shortcuts and killing the wrong guy twice on a mission ordered by a mafia kingpin. To avoid certain death, they make a body bubble from a victim’s corpse, frame their boss, and get away with the payment – A real killer story
Wouldn't the mafia boss find out early on the real mark is still alive – making trouble? It would be funny while the bungling hitmen are doing their thang the real mark shows up. I’m sure you have an answer for this, it’s just not clear to me how you overcome the gap. Take care.
Wouldn’t the mafia boss find out early on the real mark is still alive – making trouble? It would be funny while the bungling hitmen are doing their thang the real mark shows up. I’m sure you have an answer for this, it’s just not clear to me how you overcome the gap.
Take care.
See lessAn anthology series about an different high school student and a different hitman swapping bodies.
Consider the following: 1. Find a solid student/hitmen connection. 2. Tell us they switch bodies. If unique tell us how; this can answer the Why Now. 3. Tell us what they must overcome to reach their goal. 4. Up the stakes by including a ticking clock. Hope you find this constructive, take care.
Consider the following:
1. Find a solid student/hitmen connection.
2. Tell us they switch bodies. If unique tell us how; this can answer the Why Now.
3. Tell us what they must overcome to reach their goal.
4. Up the stakes by including a ticking clock.
Hope you find this constructive, take care.
See lessWhen his wife dies in childbirth the scary mobster must bring his baby to the criminal world to support his family and being a dad, or he will lose both sides of his identity.
I love this. I can see him sweating and swearing with the baby in a Baby Björn and all the other mobsters not knowing how to act or react. Brilliant.
I love this. I can see him sweating and swearing with the baby in a Baby Björn and all the other mobsters not knowing how to act or react. Brilliant.
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