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An alien woman comes to earth to mate with a deadbeat stoner. Only one thing stands in her way…a psychotically jealous, nut-job girlfriend.
I'm left questioning who the psychotic girlfriend belongs to. Is it one that followed the alien or the man's girlfriend that leaves one questioning why he has this girlfriend.
I’m left questioning who the psychotic girlfriend belongs to. Is it one that followed the alien or the man’s girlfriend that leaves one questioning why he has this girlfriend.
See lessAfter leaving prison, two aging con men go straight by opening a coffee shop but get pulled into mob-like turf war with the other caf?s in a small seaside town.
Excellent. It clearly states the protagonist, their goal and the obstacles in their way. It definitely intrigues one to imagine the different scenarios, even comedic that can arise from the situation. One can wonder, that is what one wants the reader to do, how they will be challenged and how they wRead more
Excellent. It clearly states the protagonist, their goal and the obstacles in their way. It definitely intrigues one to imagine the different scenarios, even comedic that can arise from the situation. One can wonder, that is what one wants the reader to do, how they will be challenged and how they will survive. If your aim is to have them running all the mafias (the opposite of their goal),? then you should include this as the main twist and conclusion to the story.
See lessA small town stoner encounters a knock-out female woman from An alien woman comes to earth to mate with a deadbeat stoner. Only one thing stands in her way…a psychotically jealous, nut-job girlfriend.
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