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When an underachieving gravedigger’s cemetery is taken over by his ex-girlfriend’s Mafioso father, he must rise to the occasion to regain control or end up losing more than just his job.
Just because he's a gravedigger doesn't mean he's the owner, in control of the cemetery.? Most gravediggers are just employees. And in this version, the chain of ?cause-and-effect between the ex-girlfriend and the jeopardy to the you man's life has been broken.? Why does being an ex-boyfriend of a gRead more
Just because he’s a gravedigger doesn’t mean he’s the owner, in control of the cemetery.? Most gravediggers are just employees.
And in this version, the chain of ?cause-and-effect between the ex-girlfriend and the jeopardy to the you man’s life has been broken.? Why does being an ex-boyfriend of a girl who father is a mob man put the young man’s life in danger?
The stakes are clear — his life is at stake — but “regain control” is vague as an objective goal?? What is his?objective goal — what must he specifically do ?to save his life?
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Hello, for me this logline is too vague even for a mumblecore movie. A boy meet a girl, they talk. Where's "the thing" ? I suggest you to try to write the logline for "before sunrise" and "midnight kiss", try to analyze those movies and find what makes them interesting.
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See lessfor me this logline is too vague even for a mumblecore movie.
A boy meet a girl, they talk. Where’s “the thing” ?
I suggest you to try to write the logline for “before sunrise” and “midnight kiss”, try to analyze those movies and find what makes them interesting.
It’s all fun and games at the cemetery for a twenty something gravedigger clinging to his youth, until his ex-girlfriend’s Mafioso father plots revenge for disrespecting his “little princess.”
The first clause in the line can be deleted as it doesn't describe or help set up a plot, as the main character's age and the fact he enjoys his job are?irrelevant. The story starts when the mafia boss does something to him and therefore this should be the start of the logline. In addition there neeRead more
The first clause in the line can be deleted as it doesn’t describe or help set up a plot, as the main character’s age and the fact he enjoys his job are?irrelevant. The story starts when the mafia boss does something to him and therefore this should be the start of the logline.
In addition there needs to be a specific goal mentioned, otherwise there is no plot and currently the logline is missing a goal.
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