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  1. Posted: November 17, 2015In: Comedy

    After government-testing a sexual performance pill goes wrong, an easy-pleasing business gigolo is down to his last bath of produced sperm cells. He must not “release” if he eventually wants a family, but his high-perk job may be in danger if he does not.

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    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on November 19, 2015 at 7:56 am

    There's just one problem with the gigolo's problem --it's not a seemingly insurmountable? dramatic problem. There exists a well-known, bona fide, time-tested and viable solution:? "release" and freeze the sperm? for later impregnation.

    There’s just one problem with the gigolo’s problem –it’s not a seemingly insurmountable? dramatic problem. There exists a well-known, bona fide, time-tested and viable solution:? “release” and freeze the sperm? for later impregnation.

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  2. Posted: September 17, 2015In: Comedy

    When naive but not stupid pizza master realized that he inherited a Mafia don, must confront the heads of the other families in order to bring the family business into legal channels.

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    Added an answer on November 15, 2015 at 7:21 pm

    Thank you Karel.

    Thank you Karel.

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  3. Posted: November 11, 2015In: Comedy

    When a embittered copy writer curses her job and wishes that all marketing noise, including all text to disappear, she is stunned when she notices products, billboards, signage, newspapers and even the internet turned into void blocks of empty color causing global chaos.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on November 12, 2015 at 8:45 am

    Why did she curse her job in the first place? What's driving her? What is her motivation? What is the inciting incident of her story? I would re draft the logline to include the answer to the above questions.

    Why did she curse her job in the first place?

    What’s driving her? What is her motivation? What is the inciting incident of her story?

    I would re draft the logline to include the answer to the above questions.

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