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A socially inept, arrogant Set Decorator with ambition to become a producer, leads an odd-ball crew on a schlocky Sci-Fi TV series and puts everyones job on the line.
Don't set decorators take orders from the show runner, not give orders. So how does he put everyone else's job in jeopardy? And if he does threaten the production of the show, won't the show runner just fire him, hire someone else? Someone with the social graces to play as a member of a team, not aRead more
Don’t set decorators take orders from the show runner, not give orders. So how does he put everyone else’s job in jeopardy?
And if he does threaten the production of the show, won’t the show runner just fire him, hire someone else? Someone with the social graces to play as a member of a team, not a prima donna? Isn’t he expendable? The logline doesn’t say he’s any good at his job, only that he’s difficult to work with.
See lessA mild mannered insurance salesman living in the universe where all action movies takes place gets tired of action heros always crashing everything and wants to make them answer for their latest transgression, without being drawn into the action himself.
What's his motivation? What are the personal stakes for him? He's a *SALESMAN*. More accidents means more demand for coverage, more policies sold, more re-newals -- more premiums he can pocket. He's working in a salesman's heaven.
What’s his motivation? What are the personal stakes for him? He’s a *SALESMAN*. More accidents means more demand for coverage, more policies sold, more re-newals — more premiums he can pocket.
He’s working in a salesman’s heaven.
See lessA young latina with basic english and a desire to experience independece must keep her horrible job in a American Resort and generate extra income to keep her word to return the huge invesment of trip to her parents when the season is low.
After reading the Logline it’s not completely clear. it’s missing conflict, antagonist force and the protagonist goal. Ask yourself this. What is the one thing that will drastically change the protagonist life? What is stopping her? The ultimate goal? It has to be more than day to day life. It has tRead more
After reading the Logline it’s not completely clear. it’s missing conflict, antagonist force and the protagonist goal. Ask yourself this. What is the one thing that will drastically change the protagonist life? What is stopping her? The ultimate goal? It has to be more than day to day life. It has to grab the reader and the audience attention. It’s a comedy so this is great time to get creative. I mean does she have to stay at her horrible job? Is there a love interest that is keeping her there, or maybe planning revenge on the management. Keep thinking about the possibilities.
See lessKeep it up.