“A pompous Ivy League grad” -> creates image of young, athletic male, with wealthy parents, but also very naive to the world

“working on a schlock SCI-FI TV series” -> this sounds like the inciting incident. However login might benefit from a little more cause & effect. Could be as simple a refinement as setting character to film student.

“does whatever it takes to become a producer, but ends up being his own worst enemy.” -> lots of potential here for inner character conflict, maybe even a great character piece. Clearly character identifies as ambitious. Guessing it’s the character flaw of “pompous” that is most in conflict with the social climbing goal. Still, feel this logline may benefit from a clearer antagonist. A pompous, ambitious character usually learns to resolve their flaw through humility and respecting others (not just themselves) …