1. Posted: September 10, 2020In:

    Three interwined stories between three young couples being on the run.

    Richiev Singularity

    You can do better than this... do I even need to say why?

    You can do better than this… do I even need to say why?

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  2. Posted: September 8, 2020In:

    A struggling writer’s fictional creations hold an intervention when real life responsibilities threaten to make him walk away from his dreams

    Gabriel Penpusher

    I love the idea of combining fiction and reality and confront a writer with his characters. I am a huge fan of magical realism and stuff like that. If you can, specify what the responsibilities and dreams are that you mention so we can have a clearer picture, what is at stake.

    I love the idea of combining fiction and reality and confront a writer with his characters. I am a huge fan of magical realism and stuff like that. If you can, specify what the responsibilities and dreams are that you mention so we can have a clearer picture, what is at stake.

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  3. Posted: September 7, 2020In:

    When a film crew is ungrateful on set, a fed up crafty serves up the ultimate revenge.

    NeedyGoldfish Penpusher

    This logline would benefit from a clearer major event, specifying what the film crew member does to show their ungratefulness. Same goes for the action - what does the crafty need to accomplish in order to serve up this revenge? Also, I don't know what a crafty is, and I suspect most people that areRead more

    This logline would benefit from a clearer major event, specifying what the film crew member does to show their ungratefulness. Same goes for the action – what does the crafty need to accomplish in order to serve up this revenge? Also, I don’t know what a crafty is, and I suspect most people that aren’t in the movie industry don’t either, so maybe replace that with a more descriptive term of the job.

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